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All the world that she visited were full of trashy characters. I was actually quite confused, she would be like OP character and then the next plane was as weak as shit.
I feel like the relationship between Chen Xi and his daughter is great and actually is sort of realistic whereas compared to a novel like Godly Stay at Home Dad, the dad literally is like a servant to his daughter, instead of allowing her to go through some hardships, which can lead to future development problems as they grow up.Also I finally found some of the translated chapters. Thank you author.
I hope i don't become a chicken in my next life...
overall decent but needs patience as it is a bit of a slow burner. nice work author, i can tell you put a lot of effort into it. the pacing is a bit slow to my liking, a lot of dialogue and internal confusion going on, but the writing is good and up to chapter three i was entertained. would recommend!
this is fantastic "the sweet spot" keep up the good work TSA dear
Very good so far! I'm pleased to see the concept the author has made play out so naturally, so far nothing has felt forced, and the MC's character is interesting in a good way!
Looking forward to more chapters, good luck author!
TL:DR
Among cooking webnovels, this is definitely one of the better ones. Particularly in terms of world-building, this book does a much more compelling job compared to other cooking webnovels like “Gourmet Food Supplier”, “Kitchen Xiuzhen”, and “The two-faced Venerate Emperor”. It also avoids the obvious romance cliches, which makes it much more enjoyable. I personally like the poker-faced MC type with a lazy ambience, so Bu Fang is totally a cool MC from my perspective, but for other readers the MC’s lack of emotional engagement might be a serious minus (such readers may look up “Transmigrator meets Reincarnator” and “The Heartbeat at the Tip of my Tongue” as these are also great cooking novels albeit with far more emotionally invested MCs).
Hello, everyone, I am the author of The supreme sovereign system, phamtonbullet, I just wanted to say a few things , believe me I am doing this just to express my opinion and not to shamelessly add reviews to the novel :v , so here we go:
1) I know that my nick name is writing wrong, it should be phantombullet but It was already taken, uwu.
2) I always read your comments my beloved readers, every time that you post a commend in any chapter, I read it. I know a few of you who always thanks me for the chapter, I really, really appreciate it.
3) As you may already notice, I have problems with the grammar , I am really sorry about that, I always feel bad about this, I am planning to take a few days to edit all my past chapters (1-25). I am using a few grammars correctos, and I am trying to find someone to be my proofreader(this was a suggestion from you) , in conclusion , I will do my best to give all of you a writing quality that you deserved.
3) As I was saying, I always read your commends, I know a lot of people have been complaining about the fact that I called Artemis, Artemisa. Well, the thing is this, I have ALWAYS called her by that name xD . I planned to leave it that way, however, to give you a better time in reading the novel, I changed to Artemis in chapter 30 and it will stay that way from now on.
4) This novel will be a long one, The adventures of Alfonso are just beginning, some of you have asked if Alfonso will get superpower and fight by himself, well, I won't spoil you, so I won't answer, I will only say that Alfonso would have to use his head more than his muscles...(he is crippled anyway, :v)
5) I will now(02/07/2018) put a bonus chapter system, however , to have them, I will have to shamelessly ask for your votes(spirit stones) , this bonus chapters will be given depending on what position we ended on the week:
- Ranked between 90-80 : 1 bonus chapter
- Ranked between 70-60 : 2 bonus chapters
- Ranked between 50-40 : 3 bonus chapters
I will stop there, lets be honest, we have a long way to get to further positions, when this novel consolidates itself better , I will do another system of bonus chapters.
6) I usually post 1 chapter per day.
7) Finally, I want to thank you all of you who follow the adventures of Alfonso, please keep looking forward for it! And for the ones who are just reading reviews, what are you waiting for?
Alfonso Lockheart command you! Read it!
I really like this story
over 300 chapters in ww , for those who are still waiting for the update here i affirm you it will never be updated. this is a great novel. i love the MC of this novel I read this and Library of heavens path both are best for relieving stress .any one recommend some comedy novel like this two.
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