Enigmatic_Atb
I've been searching for a novel focusing on building gangs for so long. Thanks for creating this there aren't enough of them.
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If you're an evil daoist like me, then this is definitely something you can't afford to miss. The MC is evil, he doesn't care of anyone apart from his Lil bro, he doesn't believe in the principle of love. When he is bored, he just walked into a place and you know what happens next....It's definitely a good read.
Haaa. Finished reading to the latest chapter and I'm stuck on a cliff again. Amazing. This is only the second time I've binged an original like this. This is a hidden gem and I'm surprised and pissed at how underpopular it is. What are you waiting for? Go start reading.In case you weren't convinced here's the review:Writing- 5/5 Reads like a published novel. Nothing to say here. It is a bit fast paced at parts and less detailed than your usual case-solving style novel. Written very well nonetheless. Very easy to imagine and everything is described well even with fewer details.Plot- 5/5Amazing so far. I usually end up predicting a lot of the plot and planting my flags, but here I had a clue in the middle of a few arcs maybe at most. Unpredictable plots but not annoyingly convoluted. Characters- 6/5THIS IS WHAT DID IT FOR ME. Among the best characterisation I've seen on this site. Not just the main characters, but all of them. The three things I loved the most in this novel were 1. Levi2. Sam3. The interactions between Levi and SamLevi's monologues, dialogues, behaviour are all very fun to read. The romance(?) is really well done. Exactly the kind of romance I like. If I had to give a comparision, it's somewhat similar to Hachiman and Yukino in Oregairu or Jo Minjoon and Kaya Lotus in God of Cooking. If you are sick of those CEO romance novels then give this unique take a read. Overall, must read. I've read 100s of originals on this sight and this is in my top 2 favourites. Suggestions for the author: There's nothing much I can say here. 1. In the starting few chapters there are some spelling/ grammar errors.(Very few of them hardly noticeable) Some places have comma instead of period. One place had slick blood instead of slick blonde. Couple places have wrong tense, wrong gender. I think you can fix it if you read it once :)2. For time skips within a chapter, you can leave a gap of few more lines or draw a line with stars********************************************************like this. It helps keep the imagination steady. Like seriously...there's no major flaws in the novels and I can only pick on things like this :pPlease keep up the good work.
At first, it was choppy and fast, not a lot about his personality was explained. I really like having a sort of evil protagonist. I'm sad to see this become premium since I'm a free reader and am already spending on two other novels, but one of them finishing, so maybe I'll focus on this. I'm happy for the author though, since they get to make that dough. I wish I knew more about the nightmares and how the apocalypse occurred. I like the character depth of some, and how cliche free this is compared to others.I'm not very good at reviewing books....Overall, very naisu!!!!
if you also made a story following the serial killers point of view that would be truly amazing ????????????????? and I'd definitely read!!!!
This story needs a physical publication!I would wholeheartedly preorder a hard cover first edition with a smile on my face.Then it needs a manga and anime!
The story actually about Rina and Ace or project alpha? I get bored to read it already
This is a great author! Can't wait to read more from you!
This book only have 3 chapters available to read??? .........
Hey readers!! I have started adding chapters for part 3 of The Aberdeen series here in this book It's called Aberdeen New Generation part 3 scroll through book I have it marked saying part 3. Enjoy!!
wonderful story kept me on edge a lot!
