When I saw the word Dragon in his name, I started reading. I am glad I started, I read all the chapters, I am waiting for the new chapter.
if you like Shadow Hack you'll probably like this. It shares the same concept of system giving clones that get energy from fighting. But it also has it own uniqueness with it's system being an idle type.
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The storytelling is very amateurish, there's some blatant fan service and casual sexism, but at least the MC is smart and the system mechanics are interesting.Reading up to chapter 36, I find the MC's rational decision making very refreshing. The game mechanic (where leveling up with soul energy sometimes rewards you with an item instead if there's excess) is creative in its own way.However the storytelling itself is amateurish. Small fights that we know the MC or another character will win are described instead of cut, allowing the plot to progress faster. There's also a lot of repetitive descriptions of characters that should also be cut.Tropes: Ice queen tsundere, a lot of hot blooded men, and OP dark lord MC himself. No arrogant young masters (yet).Also, Lilith could totally be cut out of the beginning. She's only there for comedic relief, fanservice, and to inform the MC of "things he would figure out eventually."Lastly, there is definitely some casual sexism, culture shocks, that people might not like.
Finally! You did a rewrite of Zenith! I hope its better and more amazing than the other already amazing novel! Good work and good luck!! Cant wait to read the .ew changes.
What a nice story. I liked the names of the characters and the dialogues are written wonderfully. There are some errors, like tenses that are easily fixable. Do try using Grammarly app. It helps a lot.Overall it's a good novel keep it up.
I mean I just a master piece so in-depth with characters and story would read again and again without hesitation. Looking forward to the next book to read can’t wait !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Usually I dont write reviews but for this book I will make an exception. I my opinion this is easily one of the top 5 novels on this site it is just that good and I am not an easy one to please in that aspect since I am usually very critical of original novels but not in this case. I am always longing for a new chapter and get dissapointed if there is no chapter that day. This is also easily the Best apocalyps novel I have ever read while I dont usually like apocalyps novels while being one this one doesnt feel like one for some reason which is a big plus for me. But all in all I just want to reccomend this book to everyone reasing this review and say to the author: Keep up the good work!
Alright, this story is kinda bad. First off, the main character has a system that rewards him for doing "ordinary" things. For example, making food, cutting logs, fetching water. Things that a ordinary villager would do. Thats fine and dandy, and theres definitely a way to make this into a novel, however this is not how you do it. Not far into the novel, the main character is fighting people left and right. Literally every other person he meets he ends up assassinating because they have some bad thoughts towards his junior sister who hes protecting.
First off, lets start with the story development. The female lead (main character's junior sister) is actually a genius who died, and then regressed back in time. The main character is a reincarnator. So, the female lead constantly gets into trouble, and it's not even funny. Literally every other sect wants to kill her, refine her into a pill, force her into being someones maid, etc. It's actually ridiculous. You see, the longer the story goes on, the more and more the main character is using his parody-level overpowered strength to assassinate people seventeen major realms above him, and it's just not fun to read. The main character literally gets stronger from doing ordinary things, it's fine if the main character occasionally goes out to protect the female lead, but it shouldn't be this much. It ruins the entire point of the main character staying low-key and having parody-level strength.
As for the characters? They suck, plain and simple. It's one of those "you dare kill me, young master of blah blah blah" then "you dare kill my son" then repeat endlessly until it's devolved into a massive war. Like what I mentioned previously, it's just endless conflicts in a novel that was originally a slice-of-life-cum-action novel. Now, it's just a action novel. The female lead is beyond stupid, it can't be put into words. Imagine being able to regress, and relive your life, and somehow causing even more problems than you did in your previous life. Female lead says shes going to protect her sect and senior brother, but ends up doing the exact opposite. The main character has to help her out from the shadows over and over again, which causes even more trouble. It's just endlessly repeating fights.
The world background is alright, average at best. The main character barely leaves his sect so theres not a whole lot to be told, even with him occasionally leaving to fight someone.
Overall, the plot and characters are rather poor, and it very quickly devolves into a endless-combat action novel. Which, believe it or not, isn't that fun to read.
I Really am enjoying tHe nobel so Far. I like how descriptive is. but what chapter do we Find out what the mc looks like. iM at the chapter when theyre getting Prepared to leave and his appearance still hasnt been descr ibed
This is just stupid and hard to read. Feels more like a wish fullfilment of some 13 year old than an actaul story. Just no. Read at your own risk.
I have read it in my mother-tounge before. it's marvelous and great. Steady development. No blood-thirst. Logic. Deep. No cheap tricks to lengthen the novel with useless meaningless words. A great work.