The introduction of the novel is simply epic and makes me want to read more about the novel ,
On the introduction itself , we got to see the protagonist and the situation which he is faced with which is a realistic video game that left everyone awestruck ...
Can the novel really keep me edged to my seat , that i don't know but i'm really excited to read the novel❤️❤️❤️❤️
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amazing work keep up the good work (here an idea try adding creating table/workbench so when he upgrades it he can blue futuristic high walls)
It's trash. Actually maybe worse than that, some trash is recyclable. I don't know who the target audience is with a psycho MC like this story has but I hope I never meet them. If you've ever read a bad story whereas every man the MC meets wants to r*pe, murder and steal from them. This is a story from those peoples perspective. Why would anyone want to root for them, I don't know. Even terrible stories treat these characters as cannon fodder to show how much better their MC is. One of the worst trail reads I've read. You've been warned.
I really enjoyed the first 39 chapters, I hope it gets picked up.
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The novel's okay. Has some cliches but at the same it's a breath of fresh air. And looks like in this one the transmigrator will take some time to wake up.. usually it happens in first chapter but here it only gets mentioned at chapter 19. 20 chapters are not quite enough to make up an opinion about this novel because it looks promising yet at the same time the author threw some cliches at us. MC's has different mentality than your usual MC that's for sure
Hi, your book is really good, but I noticed some errors, if you're in need of a proofreader, I can do it for free. I like how you sometimes make a serious situation seem funny, keep up the good work ✍
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Do not be confused by this 3*
I would have no problem recommending someone this book. Is this a "must read"? no I wouldnt say so. There are some key moments that the author kinda seems to skip over which leads to a kind of confusing plot and character development. However I wouldnt be surprised at all if this author was writing 4 or 5 star material by his next novel or even this one. He/she gets a lot of things right in my opinion.
Heres more specific feedback
1. I wish I could see the character changing, instead of the end results. I kind of missed the specific moments where he evolves emotionally, then I get told later that it did.
2. The perspectives of the different characters do a lot here. Its completely underutilized in other novels and I cannot express how much I appreciate it. It helps me understand how the character is influencing the world around him. Thanm you author.
3. emotional extremes. kick him while hes down, hype him when hes supposed to win. While I think its been going fine so far, imo it could be taken a step farther. That one could totally be personal preference though.
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Hi love the beginning of the story hope you build the story on Mcu can’t wait hope you continue on it......................................................................