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the story is nice and very innovative i have not seen any novel that mc is energy so as the character design it is unique although as an orphan boy it should be much more antisocial instead of always trying to be with humans every time, the writing quality it is good, stability is one chapter a day and chapters a little short, the world should be a multiverse or omniverse so it should be quite vast even if at the moment it is only in a cultivation world and not much is known about the various levels of power right that there are people with various techniques, mc since he met humans history has taken a more boring turn especially when he abandoned a fish that quietly gave him endless energy just parasitizing him and shouldn't do anything because he can go to sleep, however for the moment there are only 37 chapters I hope the author continues because he seems to have a story with good potential even if for the mometo mc it is stupid I hope there is a growth of the character and character where he becomes more ruthless and intelligent because from what it seems after reincarnation even if he has all the memories mc seems to have become like a white piece that has to learn new things to grow
The only thing I dislike about this novel is that the MC is super stupid. He does such basic mistake even in the late part of the story. If not for the plot Armor he would have died 100 times.
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Calling this garbage is an insult to the word garbage. this author is a 3rd rate writer with zero talent or creativity. the only thing he might be good at is boot licking his country's autocratic government that does horrible things like arresting women that dissent against their government and then systematically r@ping them, forced labour, strictly controlled media to hide their revolting actions e.t.c. WARNING: Great probability of racism in later chapters
This is the first time I'm reading a story of this genre and trust me, it is way captivating more than what I imagined. I love your writing style , author. The story outline is really magical and unique. keep it up author.
first : i want to tell that i don't OWN THE AUTHOR RIGHT
Second : IT'S NOT MINE
THIRD: NOT MINE
Its a very good book and Im looking forward for its next chapters. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This story is utterly trash. The author has literally no talent for writing. He contradicts himself in every chapter, can’t decide what power system he wants to use, and cannot make his characters make logical decisions.
Overall bland. This more closely resembles some sort of cliche romance story, than a light novel. Needless anticipation all over the place, slow development. This novel is simply unsatisfying and unfulfilling. There you are waiting for some sort of catalyst of change, and 50 chapters later, he is no different. Worst of all, I don't know what I'm even supposed to expect. The writing is the only redeeming factor, because the standard is already garbage. I doubt most people will bother with this, there is nothing particularly enthralling, and the upload rate is also abysmal. The first chapter was probably the only good one, everything from then on, is weak. Worst of all, prefacing the novel with a warning that the protagonist would be cowardly and pathetic for the first 50 chapters is just plain moronic. Expecting people to wait 50 chapters for the protagonist to resemble anything decent is just presumptuous.
Dystopia? Check.
Excellent power progression? Check.
G o d ? Check.
Great writing? Check.
A sizeable amount of chapters? Check.
Count me in? Check.
Our world must not be a dystopia if web novels are of this level of quality.
Greak work!
If this novel doesn't get selected, I am fu****g gonna learn chinese just to read this in raw. Thats all i have to say for this one.
Peace out.