the mc is "bratty" and have "denial" issue. he said he read many manga and novel(?) but.....
I can't do review. so I'll stop now....
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review at chapter 29
I could give a 5-star but the pacing is a bit fast. It wouldn't hurt to take time to progress the story naturally. But I get it, sometimes being a writer is dealing with excitement for the new ideas you thought of. But please, moderate it as much as you can.
The author demonstrates an exciting imagination that reflects in their craft. As the novel develops, the writer grows in skill and conveys more meaning in what they write; a personal favourite factor of mine. With Akio as our protagonist, this story is sure to be, and already is, a wild ride.
Wow, this novel have the quality of a professional story written by seasoned novelist , the start of this novel remember me a little the slow paced but epical Archean Eon Art, hope get resurrected and picked by one of the ace translator, for sure this novel have the potential to make it to the top 20 or even higher of the popular ranking.
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Hey im new here
I haven't even read the book but I know it will be interesting
Keep the good job rolling author
Update daily also
It's really good. Can you please update more chapters?
I want to know more about this novel.
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Even though the title is 'the incubus system' I would like if somehow the could also wield light energy. After all he is a nephilim. He should have this advantage , besides it would also allow us insight into the angels world maybe.
I really liked the novel, atleast until the newest chapter where there is ntr, normally I would give this 5 stars but the ntr ruined everything
the Novel is really great!! Thank you so much for your creativity, it was the perfect novel for me at the moment but you see im actually just a free reader here, so I just feel unfortunate to not be able to follow through the book but thank you anyway.
This book is the most boring book I've read in webnovel. Author don't be offended, others might enjoy reading it but not me..................
I just can't go on, clearly author's focus is "comedy". By comedy I mean classic cn novel comedy that usually means lowering character's IQ as needed and forcing the plot. I have read only till c16, but mc has already taken predatory loan, made bad business deals etc. All things that even below average intelligence person could manage. I mean he didn't even freaking go to the bank for loan!!Worst of all, author is undermining his own character and story setting all try make cheap laughs for some special people. I mean mc is supposed to be genius and graduate from best university in universe basically. Not to mention he's thousands of years old. But yeah, he has basically no emotional control, intelligence or knowledge about anything. Well anything that gets in way of author making "funny" aka. stupid, cringe and forced situations happen.