DaoistTg0XmbcYh
as a read more and more is not a story about some mma orc
its about Anna the humen swordwomen thats turn to she orc and her 4 girlfriend big disappointment
I'm a huge fan of stories about cultivation and leveling up.
I think this book has the potential of becoming my next favorite cultivation story if you take out some of the repititive words used. I'd love the action to happen soon tho
Sorry, I lost my interest when I read about summoning stuff..
MC chino diciendo cosas de chino y sobre todo haciendo el ridículo
I loved it. It made me cry, it made me laugh, it made me pee. It is the best novel I ever read. Only People with any person with cognition function would understand this. If you can Read and not Illiterate please rate the highest rating and make it the best novel on ***.webnovel.com.
Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender.
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Niice
So far, it is good and i really hope you dont drip it.
raw pls.....................................
Lowkey kinda nice. Only problem I have is that the chapters are too short so please increase them. Overall it's pretty nice
This is amazing! I'm usually not a fan of the werewolf genre, but this one has completely won me over. I can't wait for the next chapter! Kudos to you!
Let’s be honest, this novel is a unique novel but not the rare one. I like this kind of pet-shop-cultivation-novel but later I had gradually became so disappointed when I read the raw.
The tittle novel is “Astral Pet Shop” but this novel hardly mentioned the development of the shop, they didn’t even sell the astral pet but only selling food pet and training customer’s astral pet. That’s all.
What’s about the mc? Geeeh, mc is arrogant and a bit madman. Instead how to develop his own shop, mc is rather provoked every big families. He is smart but no wise.
He chose to enter the outside secret realm with the risk of one time death when the system already provides him with many secret realms with endless death. The only thing he need is a little bit time, he just need to wait patiently and accumulation of money from shop but he ends up running into the greater risk and provoked some big figures.
Seriously, the more i read the more disappointed i became and gradually i lose interest then I drop it.
The concept itself was very good and unique but author made this novel to became so cliche.
The side characters were even more worst then the mc’s.
Overall rate: 5/10
