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Sword and shield
Great sword
Cross bow (Bowgun)
Do you play Monster Hunter World in **4 too?
Putting Monster Hunter element into Wuxia novel
This is revolutionary Wuxia light novel!
Ask of now there is not alot of release so I will rate it as is. It's not bad. Kinda funny. I look forward to the story development. IS THIS YURI?
Quit while your ahead the dialog in this is horrible. Its like reading a chat log for example,
Char A says "..."
Char B "...."
Add that onto the fact that the entire premisis of the novel is some S&M fans fap fantasy its not worth the loss of brain cells.
Writing Quality well written , but sorry i forced my self to read 14chap i cant no more the mc total IDIOT TOTALY. good luck author with your novel
I’m suuuuper impressed by this story. Not is it entertaining but well paced with good character building as well
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Cool stuff
Author here: I WANT TO SAY THAT I AM PUTTING VERY MUCH COURAGE IN WRITING THIS STORY , AND I JUST WANT TO ASK FOR A SINGLE THING , ATLEAST GIVE IT A TRY AND GIVE FEEDBACKS ABOUT MY MISTAKE AND THE STORY , I WILL SURELY TRY TO FIX ALL THE PROBLEMS. THANKS.
Very captivating book, the mc is 100% awesome...the writing quality is amazing, a good book i highly recommend it❤️
the grammar is disgustingly bad. the story is somehow worse. i wouldn't mind if the grammar was just bad, but it has reached an extent where I as a reader, am forced to decipher the meaning every sentence. This is not reading, this is torture.
The author did mature in his writings! I must say he was already that good
