MrMoon
This novel is very interesting. The main character truly loves studying and spends most of his time doing it. Unlike the typical MCs who get system cheat and want to chase women they couldn't before, status etc. He doesnt care about that, the system boosts his desires and he still has to work hard. The side characters are also not very bland however the story is very slow paced which some might not like the slow development. He is not nowhere close to the college exams. Give it a try.
synopsis is good. hopefull the story would be as well. lets see what happens. Looking forward to read this one.filling the wordsfilling yhe words.
I don't like the ML sooooOoo ******* ,no loyalty ,dishonest .etc... ( even thought in real life is hard to find a forever .. I want to read novel that has Forever ) ??? ?
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I like the story and the movement of the plot line. He got the system - YesCompleting missions -YesSlow development - yes (probably because of chapter length is small)World development - No (hardly say anything about the place he live in. is it still earth or other?)character - under developed My only con of this story is MC character. He was doing odd jobs in university to do the living, suddenly ine day he got the system and become studious I can accept that but this also changes his character as a whole he become completely emotionless unless author want to create some comedic moment, he looks down on his friends for playing games and stuff like normal college students do (which he also do before system). one instance in recent chapter (as of ch. 122) he looks down on a Indian guy in princeton (whose friendly to mc) for doing some calculation error laughs on him saying wasting his funding coming all the way to princeton. In some sense without system MC would be passing down flyers in streets while that Indian guy even with calculation error is genuinely genius doing his presentation in princeton using reverse mathematics which no one uses even author agreed upon.All in all I want is MC should have some sense in the way he treats the people around and not act as guy whot billions in lottery and become a complete douchebag.And for Author please do not make stereotypes of all westerners you know. By reading this novel I know you are patriotic and thats good for you but MC is not you and you didn't set any consistent worldback ground to MC have a biased view other than using same same on earth.My overall impression : 2.8/5. This doesn't mean I don't recommend reading it but take it with a grain of salt.
They update it at least 2 times a week. there are few mistakes in grammar and spelling, but overall it is very well done. I just have to say one more thing and this last thing is to the translator. Thanks for putting your time and effort into this.
Shameless Author here, I had to give 5 star to my novel XD,After 15 chapters and 100k views, I thought it's time for me to write one of this.What to expect from the novel?lemons - Yes, With some pretty good plot<3Harem? - Definitely. System - No, there is none.Face slapping - Yes..Politics - Yes, not the whole plot though.OP Antagonist? - Well we will find that out in the novel.MC - Although we have some information on Joe, by no means he was an ordinary sect master. we will find that out later.Action - Not in the beginning.Romance - Yes, mc is not a maniac and just live to kill.Different characters - Yes, a lot.chapter updates - I'm a student so I try to put one chapter daily (not contracted).World background - This will gradually improve, I plan to write this one, a long and beautiful story in a unique world.(not more than 2k).Writing Quality - Although English is not my first language, you won't find mistakes that often. (comment if you find one ;) )Character Design - I try to be as elaborate as possible in terms of the characters. I'll share their art soon.Discord? - After we have more than 30 members in it's support, Till than follow @asrel_writes321 on Instagram.Also read my another work "Foretell Of Ascension" I first didn't plan to write this one so soon but I had to take part in WPC so... you get it right.Atlast, This is technically my second novel. but you can say its my first because I dropped the first novel around 4 chapters. That's it from my side guys. Stay healthy and have a good day.-Asrel~Happy Reading!!
Imposible que no te enganches con la historia, muy buena realmente. El cómo Akira va mejorando a lo largo de la historia y como evoluciona como persona, desearía que tengo más desarrollo con Sheryl.
Frankly, I think Release the Witch should be No.1 and we should be No.2. If you agree with me, vote with your power stones! This is my pledge to everyone here, if we hit top 10, I'll dump one of my other novels to translate 7 more chapters per week. If we ever hit No.2, I'll translate another 7 more chapters.
MC is too much of a sociopath. He kills people if things are invonvenient for him. I read around 180 chapter only to drop it after that. Mc's personality is not compatible with mine. He is the person who wouldn't care to kill millions of people only to make his goal easier by 5%. I read a lot of novels including Warlock of the Magus World but somehow the mc of this novel triggers me.
This is my second review in two years now. The novel has gained a much more defined identity since then, having defined strengths and areas that some consider shortcomings. With this review, I wish to convey the core domains of focus of this novel to manage your expectations.This novel focuses on the intersection between martial art with science and the world. I have created a framework of martial art centered around science and an intricate and deep world centered around martial art.If you are interested in exploring a refreshingly unique hard power system centered around science, then this novel is for you. If you're interested in an intricately constructed world woven around martial art and its impact on civilization, then this novel is for you. I would advise you to be patient when reading this story, it is slow by any reasonable measure.
Nora is a strong and resilient lady. Interesting story, great characters
