The start of the story is good. The use of grammar is impeccable and the writing flows smoothly. A boy shunned and looked down upon by everyone will now show the world what he is capable of. The skillful writing of the author is sure to deliver this story to us in the most beautiful way! Can't wait to read more!!
Overall good so far, just want basic info about chapters uploading.Doesnt have harem ot r15/18 sadly thats the only thing missing.Its also fast pace huhuhu.
Author said it wont be a harem. 5/5
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amazing.I don't usually rate stories 5 stars bit this one deserved it. it's really well made and perhaps because I like the plot that's why I'm being so biased. And I really can't stretch the 'I like really like this' sentiment. Hopefully, the author would keep updating this and not disappoint
It is a great story about gaining the most benefits from a horrible situation. It is definitely something I recommen reading. -------------------------------------------------------------‐-------
I tried reading a few chapters, but just couldn’t shake the feeling that this was written by a child. Quite a few problems in grammar, but more than that is how unnatural the characters act. Author, I guess you have some ok ideas, but wait until you hit puberty before trying to write.
While I have absolutely no idea where this is going, I suggest that readers heed the warning: do read the prologue! Why? Because it's so much fun to read. And the solid worldbuilding just gets better and better to the point where you start to see an almost cinematic quality in the way things are presented - it makes you wonder, what if there was an adaptation? The language hits that sweet spot for me as well. I really hope to see this grow and gain traction.Brb, reading more.
It was really good novel. I enjoyed the plot. the protagonist and the side characters. The idea was pretty good to introduce a normal person. Too bad it ended on a awkward situation.
one of the first xianxia novels I ever read mostly via machine translation website when it was free. glad the booked even closer to a complete translation. I'm sure its as good as I remember it. a Harem novel that keeps its member working forward for a shared goal. it has its faults but its an entertaining classic webnovel.
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I was so excited when I saw Single Punch Man in the title and thought that this was a OPM fan fic, yet... who the heck is huangfu longdao??? And there’s even a system as well? You don’t need a system to become op, just 100 push-ups, 100 sit-ups, 100 squats, and 10km running every single day for 3 years.