it was interesting for like a solid 5 chapters. then is just became another copy and paste of the typical urban system mc template. speaks low, says he is content, says he just wants to be happy, but goes to the extreme with everything. judged people based on the 7 seven sins but became greedy the moment he had the opportunity. probs chinese readers complained.that he had decent interpersonal relation ships, mprals and not enough benefits and have slapping
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I really wish a few things were different.I like this novel, but it sorely lacks detail. Every arc doesn’ get fleshed out enough. Like when first visiting the origin native city I wish it had a few whole chapters on the atmosphere, markets, shops, people and shopping and trading things. Then a whole arc on the different market oppor tunities that the city and the human world that he can use to gain money and trade deals.The worst part of the novel is the mc’s subjects, every single detail that would build up a relationship or positive image of the lord is missing.. instead it’s all the lord is soo nice (just continually says this in differnt ways, instead of mc doing something that would actually make it true)Him selling his perfectly extracted stuff to only one shop was senseless. I really wish it had a arc about shopping around and making trade deals, instead of just one shop and no negotiation. This gets even worse though with the selling of blueprints, which gets worse again with the “negotiation” that happens for the first time.Honestly though it’s a perfect framework to write an amazing book, but it’s missing the details and context… rather just writes summaries for most things.
Quality story and characters, long May it continue ?
So this is kind of similar to The King's Avatar. We got our MC who made a promise to stop playing a certain MOBA if he lost and he did so he moved onto another MOBA which is League of Legends. He is great at it and that's all there really is to it rn. I mean there are some interesting characters, but they haven't really been fleshed out yet. BTW MC is in highschool 3rd year which means that he is going to a university next year. There is some conflict with his parents about his love for gaming, but I don't think it will be a plot point. Based on summary it seems like he will become a professional gamer for League. Any it was a fun read, but nothing really special. It took about 10 chapters to cover one match of league when it was being focused on so these 22 chapters should give a good dose of what to expect from the story.
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The first 40 chapters are not bad. There is a lot to be wanted for sure, but they are readable. Once you get past chapter 40 that all goes away. As others have said, the translation is horrible and it looks like the story starts to fall apart. I can't tell you what to do, but if you want to waste 2 FP per chapter like I did, go ahead. I am putting this out there so others don't make that mistake out of curiosity.
Hello, let me brief you a bit about this certain matter. I saw many people commented that because of the MC's kindness, he got betrayed. But that is only a very very small part of the reason. He got betrayed because of a very unexpected reason, but I will reveal it in the future. You may be disappointed with the first chapter, but that's because you haven't seen the future chapters yet. I don't plan to make this a typical story, so I hope you can continue to support me. Thank you!
The story was good until chapter 120 where the MC had a 180 turn and became a complete different individual for no apparent reason. MC just became toxic and all the previous relationships he had was just ignored
continue uploading these novel please. I really like these novel.
Please add more R18 scenes and don't leave the girls out of action just as in other typical CN novels.Make the girls OP and not just keeping them as beautiful vases.Everything else is so awesome so far :D
I've read the author other fanfic "Reincarnated in my own Douluo Dalu Fanfiction?!" and I loved it very much. So obviously I believe this one will be just as good so I will give it a five star review to start its career hehe.Good luck author!