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Loved it excited for the timeless assassin
Novel is quite good and fun. It definitely deserves a 5 star rating. Hoping here that it get picked...........................................
I am very happy with the fact that our mc talents lye in formations instead of pills or weapon forging. I believe those have already been done and overused by other authors so this is a great divergence from the norm. Thanks for the hard work so far keep it up.
i think the writer is awewome! ?? really good character bild up, .......................................................... ................
Fresh off the printing press! I'm glad to say I'm the first review for this promising novel! The writer engrossed you in a well-detailrd world from the get go, and always leaves you wanting more. I don't usually read werewolf books, but this one is a cut above the rest!
This novel is a worse version of Long Live The Emperor!I definitely recommend reading the other one if you like this type of setting. It's quite similar but a few things are better including MC, side-characters personalities, story, action.
Realms 0th body refinement 1st qi blood 2nd innate master3rd tongxuan grandmaster4th divine intent realm ch3525th divine origin6th divine skill7th physiognomy condensation law8th Void Breaking heavy king9th domain heavenly Immortal 10th Dao establishment heavenly union11th Creation Divine Venerate Realm12th Primortdail Supreme sovereign 13th Dao Patch Domain master
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Degenerate piece of **** MC with an ultimate power born out of chance and with no redeeming qualities or strengths of his own whatsoever. Just a sadistic fantasy of an imbecile.
Don't mind me, I just think using IRL established actors and the likes in your novel is lazy writing and I really can't read a novel where thr MC for some reason ends up spending a lot of time with some famous actress like for example Scarlet Johanson.
For me, no matter how genius a child is it wouldn't change the fact that he is still a child and that there would be times that a genius would express himself in a way a child does. However our ML doesn't, it would probably be more convincing if he was a reincarnated person than just simply a genius. Next would be the reactions of other villages/chiefs, normally they would be alarmed seeing a developing place as it may turn out to be a threat to their own territories. Also it's a bit unnerving seeing(well reading) adults not having any complaints about a 7 year old child(even if we say he is a genius) butting in / doing a deal with them.Well, I'm not all knowing or a great writer but that's just what I noticed that seems to be a bit out of place. But other than that it shows a very unique flow and not using much of the norms in such genre. And I cant really make such impression on the story so ill be taking more chapters before reviewing again.
