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reviewing just for rewards so how's everyone doing
Thank you for the update, loved the story development and character setting so far. And maybe in the future, the adeptus mechanicus will create the skiitari rangers, castelan robots, and skorpius disentigrator tanks to help fight against the arachnids' faction!!!!. I can also imagine the reactions from the terran federation towards the imperial guard and the adeptus mechanicus (tech-priests).
The story is great, the fight scenes and the power ups are also good. but the romance is probably the worse I have ever seen, everytime I read it, I feel like pulling my hair out. I'm at chapter 1249 even after the break up it just gets worse. Just stop already this romance thing is pointless and doesn't even add to the plot
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The story is very interesting . I 'm so recommending it to my friends.
Too few chapters... Imma murder you if you drop this!!.......... .....................................
Very good story, just seems to have been forgotten as its been almost a year since the last chapter.
I Have a Cheat System in the Apocalypse is a story about Felix, who has a system (I think), trying to do something? Admittedly, chapter six isn't a good point to give a objective review on a novel, however the first six chapters are so bad I cannot continue reading this.First off, the writing quality. This whole novel reads like you were hit by a truck and are now attempting to recall what happened while under anesthesia. Nothing at all makes sense in this novel. The first six chapters are so badly written that you will only be able to pick up some very superficial information. Mutants are being hunted by humans. Mutants have a school. The main character *might* have a system. That's really all I gleaned. (1/5 stars)Moving onto story development. It's awful. This might have to do with the way this story was written, but very little makes sense. I was planning on giving a general rundown of the first six chapters but I can't be asked to make sense of that convoluted mess. Anywho, the pacing is absolutely insane, main character is randomly thrown into combat multiple times, each reason he starts combat is increasingly more stupid than the last. After the main character nearly gets assassinated, but narrowly wins, a intelligent gorilla attacks them. The main character saves his assassin (thats right), and kills the gorilla. Promptly following, he falls over and dies. After this, we are suddenly thrown into a MMORPG, because why not. I could continue rambling on about various inconsistencies and plot holes that are in the first six chapters, but all you need to know is that almost every single character, idea, place, setting, that is introduced doesn't make sense. (1/5 stars)Character design. I don't really know all that much, main character has a weird obsession with money, has a close friend, that's about it. Characters are also convoluted and the main character seems like he has some form of autism, so I'm just going to default this to two stars. (2/5 stars)World background is a mess. So, from what vague inferences I can make, this is a apocalyptic world, where humanity is being attacked by various mutant beasts. So, in spite of this, the government decides to hunt down and kill humans with abilities? Anyway, school the main character has a super-powerful mutant in charge, but all it takes to pressure him is a mech and like ten police officers. Well, author only spent about five chapters in the real world before the main character dies and goes into a MMORPG world, so whatever. (1/5 stars)Overall, this is a very bad novel, but in a new way. I haven't seen as many novels that are as convoluted as this. Writing quality is very bad, and causes a lot of confusion right off the bat. The story development and world background don't help this either, making reading this even more confusing. I would recommend the author to use a story board and plan ahead, and at the very least fixing the abhorrent pacing issues. I give this novel 2.0 stars out of 5.
A good read. Starts slow and the chapters are short. So you can read it on the go. It also has plenty of potential and hopefully, the author will update this regularly.
A post apocalypse world setting with interesting plot. Though the language quality is a bit bad grammatically, the plot is well thought. As only 30 or so chapters are released so far I can't say much, but the story so far looks promising with no plot holes and fillers. Hope release rate will be more frequent.
The narration come on author, it's so good! The world background seemed to be realistic to me, something that's gonna happen. There is no confusion when you read its like very clear from the start. An amazing story!You are doing a good job!