Hellooo~ Author here!I juust want to thank you for your help and enjoying my story! In a week, we already reached 20K views!! Thaaaaannk you so much!! I can't help but be thankful for the support?
Author said he will be back by end of month in october, at the end of october author said give me a little bit. Its now december. Our author has just vanished so I'm gonna go off a limb and say that this has been dropped
The grammar is good, you can read every chapter good without any problems, the story is nice, it has a good pace too, I like that like the minor ranks are more skipped, like "after 4 months training...
After much deliberation...And a full two chapters of this novel, I've decided to stop reading it....All the info dump with all the list of system attributes whatnots are seriously messing with me...Just after the first chapter I already got the feeling of exhaustion and when I thought chapter two would be better, it gave me the same thing...Maybe you would like to read something like this but it's not just my cup of tea...
I really like this story and the direction it is going but that being said it had a really rough start and you have to push through the first few chapters where the author forces the MC into a really bad situation where he has to dig himself out of it with the help of his best friend. I think this was workable and the story developed nicely but the biggest issue is the constant grammar errors and word choice that makes this book difficult to continue and the reason I dropped it once it went premium. If the author was able to get a proofreader or an editor i think i would pick the story up again! This is just one lousy opinion and I hope the author can keep working the best they can and continue to improve!
I have always been a big fan of The King's Avatar since i first encountered it. I have even watched both the animated series and the live action series. I am very much looking forward to this new prequel novel. ?
Kid who was kidnapped at 3 years old, held in terrorist organization hideout and trained brutally for 6 years. Being beaten, forced to train, being brainwashed to be a mindless killer, being thrown into a room with all other kids and told 'last one to survive is free to go' and ends up being the last man standing. After all of this, SWAT raids the hideout and he gets rescued, not only does he have NO trauma, he acts like a grownup while talking with others, he trusts some random man to adopt him, agrees, goes home with the man and after 2 weeks of being there he GETS A FRIEND who is his age. How would a kid with past like that be able to trust anyone, not to mention make a friend? And to top it off, the 'friend' who is martal arts genius, who trained a lot, but only sparred, never had to fight for his life, somehow manages to fight the MC to a tie in a duel? The character design is very, very bad. His background is a massive plothole. No idea why the author would introduce a background like that, only to make the MC 'normal'.
Haven’t read it but the germinal organization!!!!!!!?Reminds me of great mechanic han in the legendary mechanic....Anyways let’s try it out...
I like the story but it has been around 50 chapters but I barely know about MC’s friends’ characters like they were his best friends but were introduced and suddenly left, nothing about what’s happening in real world. Where is his body now in real life since his soul is trapped and etc etc. Majority of focus is on him fighting monsters. Barely any conversation with characters other than Aurora. And this is all in constructive criticism. I still like the novel but I hope you would spend a little more time on creating a background of world likw what is happening around him, what are his friends and other people feeling around him. So that we can also dive into the world through your novel
The first thing I don't like is that mc was a samurai before reincarnation/transmigration(which is just a few lines) but there is nothing in the main story that relates him to samurai... it's a usual xanxia novel trope..op comprehension...gf left him(u know what happens after that..)..till now what I have read is usual cliche scenes and tropes in every xanxia novels. its okay if u think it as usual xanxia novel ...but u have namesd this as "evil samurai in cultivation world" but where the hell are samurai skills....im totally disappointed...its title is nothing more than a clickbait
this novel is too good, it looks like a novel but this one is sunnier, in the other novel, we were only in the earth and the story was too dark for my taste, but this one is talking about ten worlds or more, I don't know, it's promising
HONEST REVIEW! The story was great. TRANSLATION was perfect and only had times were to author repeated themselfs but I can deal with that.STORY DEVELOPMENT was good as well considering you can only do so much with a sign in system. It was pretty obvious that whenever the character needed something he would get it from the system almost immediately and if its not useable now then it would be later.WORLD BACKGROUND was Vast and Amazing. The author made a world that never lacked mystery’s that could be explored. And even when the main character went to a place multiple times there would always be new things to learn. Another great thing was while the mc was OP throughout the whole story the world scaled with him. Meaning while he was getting stronger the world was too.CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT was okay. The male lead was really likeable and the side characters really stood out in the story. The mc while confident wasn’t arrogant like you usually see in cultivation novels. The biggest problem for me was the Female Lead who was the mc’s love intrest. She was introduced in a good way and it was shocking but also anticipated that she would be the romantic interest. However her background was never explored and was just left in contemplation, the bad part is it was brought up several times but never explored.THE BIG PROBLEM! The biggest problem was actually the ending. The whole story they made the mc op and would push his limits to get stronger to overcome his difficulties, however in the end game he felt TOO WEAK. He would get strong enough to fight many people at once but in the face of the TRUE POWERHOUSES he was an ant. Another thing in the finale fight they made him basically fight foot soilders while other’s fight the powerhouses. Now onto the thing I hated the most. In the end They not only won the battle but lost the war but they also ended off on a CLIFFHANGER. So much was unexplored and if that’s not the worst it’s the fact that the mc doesn’t even know where his WIFE IS. That really ticked me off. OVERALL Overall I really enjoyed the story but the ending really needs to be revised and redone. So read it, it’s a great story just dont get your hopes up with the ending.