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Greedy translator cant even keep his quota of chapters per week and thinks he can win us over with 10 chapters after premium, like is this novel really worth me paying this much stones, trash translator.
Well...I'm here to support one of my favorite authors here on the Webnovel. This is another one of his work so i already know this is going to be good. Although this is a eastern fantasy novel with cultivation in this but at least it's different from most of the brain-dead cultivation novels which are present everywhere. The ML is not some naive character with some hero-complex, so this is a plus for me. And obviously since this a cultivation novel...the plot runs deep!!!....to know more about the characters and the plot do read the story.
I will touch a few aspects of the novel:First comes story development - While some people prefer to see quick power up boosts, I appreciate the slow development of the story. I firmly believe MC needs time to develop even if he is a genius - it makes no sense if he suddenly becomes the strongest in the world.Second comes romance - From the former novel of the author I believe he is against useless harems with countless useless and weak wives everywhere. However, in 60 chapters only, MC already has "collected" 2 wives, making me wonder if it's a harem system instead of a villain one. Hopefully, author won't turn it into another generic harem novel, where every woman is completely useless and barely gets story time after he conquers her. As MC should already know about all outstanding women in advance (if I got it right he is in a world of a novel he has read in his previous life), maybe he has already set his eyes on a few women?Last aspect I want to talk about is the villain aspect - Although MC seems not to hesitate to kill some men, he seems to have a soft spot for women - he never considers killing the heroines of the protagonists he is hunting, insetad, he only tries to charm them first. While it seems to make him seem less vile, I guess its up to author how to set his characteristics as he doesn't really have to be a merciless mass murderer in order to be a villain.I feel it's too soon to comment about the system setting, as too much info is lacking - we don't know the criterions that need to be met in order to kill a protagonist, we don't know how the lottery works (somehow he always gets 2 prizes every time insetad of one) and so on, I just assume author will reveal it through the story.Keep up the good work and good luck to the author, it's a great story!
DONT DROP....DROPPING IS A "SIN". According to the Legendary (fake) Article 404Error: Translator / Author that drop novels is punishable by: WRITING FOR ETERNITY ...."Kekeke" *Evil laugh* ???
The MC is an immortal from the immortal world who suffered some kind of accident that caused him to die and transmigrate/reincarnate into the body of a fat loser high school senior on earth. MC uses his superior immortal knowledge to accelerate his cultivation and beat his peers. MC is cold and indifferent, except to his sister and loves drooling over women. Note: There are a lot of cliches, such as face slapping, annoying stuck up white skin and big boob beauties, jealous young masters, and justice for any grievances.
Interesting characters and nice pacing! I love to see the improvement in writing with each chapter. Easy to follow along. Keep it the good work!
Well still fresh ,soo i will say ,whats next, you hace a vote and a chance to go big.I tought about the same thing before and i wanna ser Joe thats played información tour mind Good luck and gods speed.
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I'm going to be honest — I didn't expect the dialogue to be this good. Some web novels have characters who all sound the same, but this author gives each person a distinct voice and the conversations actually feel natural. Let me start with Sun Xu because his dialogue is a masterclass in showing character through speech. When he's with clients, he goes full sycophant: "Mr. Wang, this way, please!" "The greatest highlight of this property is its panoramic floor-to-ceiling windows!" "In feng shui, this is called a jade belt encircling the waist. It gathers wealth and brings blessings!" Notice how he uses big words and feng shui terminology to sound professional. He's performing competence. And it works on Mr. Wang — or at least, Mr. Wang is performing interest. The dialogue here is layered because we're meant to understand that Sun Xu is selling an experience, not a house. But then the moment the clients leave his sight and he sees Zhong Suian, his voice changes completely: "What are you two doing?" "Can't you see I'm showing important clients around?" "Get out of here immediately!" "If you ruin this deal, I'll make you regret it!" Short, sharp, aggressive. No performance. This is his real voice when he thinks no one important is listening. The contrast between these two modes of speaking tells us everything about him without the author having to explain it. Zhong Suian's dialogue is the opposite. She's calm, measured, and always polite. Even when she's confronting Sun Xu, she says things like: "Clients are free to choose whom they sign with." "If your service is poor, the client naturally has the right to reject you." She never raises her voice. She never insults him directly. She states facts and lets him hang himself. This is her power — she doesn't need to be loud to be effective. Ms. Zhang's dialogue is also distinctive. She's direct and uninterested in pretending otherwise: "I actually prefer the houses in Emerald Lake Court." "I simply can't stand the disgusting attitude of certain salespeople." "Pack your things today and get out of my house." Three sentences that establish her as wealthy, decisive, and done with nonsense. The author doesn't need to describe her personality — her words do it. And the best line has to be Sun Xu's invitation to the celebration: "Of course, certain people who can only live off their base salary are welcome to come too, provided they're shameless enough." This is peak Sun Xu. He can't resist a dig even while celebrating. It's so petty and so revealing. The author wrote this line and I laughed out loud. The narrative voice itself is also worth praising. It's concise and observant, never over-explaining. When Sun Xu's expression changes, the author tells us "his expression immediately darkened" and moves on. When Zhong Suian watches Qi Anhe negotiate, we get "She was highly satisfied. As expected of the male lead's future right-hand man." This kind of brief, confident narration trusts the reader to fill in the gaps.
This book speaks of real life situation. I cried while reading I could feel Tamias sadness.