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Сверх супер мега толстая сюжетная броня.Ужасная реализация идеи.Проработка персонажей....Сам мир то ещё дерьмо...................................................................................................................................................
interesting novel for a change of peace but too much info the ch design is a full 5 star but the rest is on 3 stars with stabilty of up at 4 the story is too slow paced and there are info that are useless like when there is the story how is founded a sect or a pavilion merchant, i was like (why wold i care how this sect or pavilion is created? progress the story already) it is a very funny novel but the too much info and side chs are ruining this novel so 3.6 the novel is not averenge it is ok you can read this if you are bored of the alywas usual cultivation novel where mc talk like some chosen one it is not a master piece but an ok novel
Kevin, please. You hath ascended the mortal writing stratus and become exhalted in the realms. You have written the best... The best... Original Novel on this site. The BEST!! Your writing skill is beyond the heavens!!
Nothing new, nothing different. It's a tried and tested premise, and the execution isn't anything to write home about either. The translation is horrible, and really disrupts the reading experience.
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled7. You are wandering why you are still reading this8. You saw that mistake, right?(On 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 912. I said "saw you" not you saw13. I also skipped 214. You got tricked15. Follow me for exp ;)16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
Dumbest MC I've read in a while. This guys does exactly what his enemies want him to and acts like he's smart for doing so.... Please save me from this MC.
Ughh this Novel is terrible. I mean I never seen something so disgusting in my life lol. I’m not even going to spoil it, just go to NU. It’s just stupid.. just why would they translate? It’s too cancerous. I guess people just love junk food...
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Interesting premise, but the MC is pure scum.Gets a system with no explanation how it works, and for a second I thought it could only be used for committing crimes, but it seems to be omniscient.Instead of healing his girlfriend, he keeps finding ways to become stronger, commit more crimes and bed other women.I'm all for not engaging in the prudery you get in other novels where the MC doesn't indulge in his desires, but there should be priorities, and the author, ahem the MC is horrible at figuring them out.
I read up till ch.18 but nothing of interest happened. MC got a memory of the future but had done nothing about it. He's still the same man so to call this transmigration or reincarnation is not entirely correct in my opinion. I thought even if it's just memory, he'd use that to his advantage, but nothing of the source at all. I will continue to see further but if MC didn't take advantage of what he has, then I don't see the point of continuing with this story. Came here for a future knowledge kingdom-building story, and till now, nothing happen most of the early chapters can be skipped and you hardly miss a thing.
soooooo thrilling read....the type of writing that author-san used is so intriguing too...the flashbacks once in a while keeps me soo entertained...???????
There has been no update for months now, and no explanation either. After sticking with the story for more than 1100 chapters, I want an ending. The translator should have finished his job. If not, I will try to contact the admin because I want to know what the fak is going on.
