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story is great but you should use commas and punctuation marks brackets etc and make it more Readable overall it is nice I will support you with power stones so keep it up bro
really great plot so far! I enjoyed it a lot!
I like the mind twist when that fantasy setting turns into a sci-fi setting.I also like that the author has clearly put in effort into researching sci fi themes and terms and has flavoured his work with it, granting a more robust sci-fi feel. Thumbs up!
Shameless Author #2198 reporting for duty.NevermindIf I were to rate my novel.Writing Quality - 3/5, slowly changing to a 4/5 as my literary skills improve.Story Development - 4/5 The beginning is quite slow, but it'll generally speed up as time goes on.Character Design - 4/5. Characters aren't really one dimensional, but some are just made on the spot and left by the dust as one of the MC's acquaintances. Some will appear in different instances of the novel.World Background - 5/5. The only thing I believe I did well on, not including the block of texts in the history chapter. (Don't read it unless you like that type of stuff.). The Frontier is the boundary of discovery and improvement. Follow the story as you see the progression of the MC and the improvement of my literary devices as times go on.
When I read the synopsis I was pretty impressed. So many information and events in just a few lines, so I thought if I could really get what you want to say on this novel, but when I started the first episode it made me laugh, and I think it's a really good thing! because I understood what style of writing you have and it's very fresh,Keep going!
Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Author here, finally decided to start and try making a novel and see how that goesThis is my first "book
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This has definitely become one of my favourite novels to read after becoming tired of most of the novels these days. The grammar is not the best, but it is definitely readable and the story is worth it. If you find factory stuff satisfying and you like to see soldiers in a cultivation world with guns, try this novel out. It isn't rushed and you will see the impact of our modern ideologies in another world.A tip I would give after reading up to chapter 25 would be to view capital letters as the start of new sentences. Also, sometimes lists are missing commas. Other than that, read with imagination and creativity. There is no romance or weird behaviour so far, it's pure content.Would recommend.
Hello everyone So far the story is really captivating And interesting For someone That really like stories with a system and missions that makes the character grow this story is already getting Better and as tge chapters keep on coming I’m Sure that the story will have all kinds of plot twists and possibly a few near death experiences.