Could get better but has an interesting story line that has hope and it's a good book in general can't wait to see where it's headed kudos and continue doing your best
If your new to web novels you will probably like this novel. those of you like me who have read dozens this novel probably isn't for you. The best way I would describe it is everything seems really shallow at best. it has no depth to it and the writing is subpar compared to most decent novels. Every sentence has to much or to little. With the writer adding completely pointless info into almost everything. just one example being "mask of mischief what a peculiar name, Long chen thought in his mind as he went threw this knowledge." is there a need to add in his mind. can't be "mask of mischief what a peculiar name, Long chen thought as he sorted out the information he received." idk maybe the writer thinks most people are to stupid to figure out that thought takes place in the mind and we cant make that connection without reading it. that's just a small example. Wouldn't be a big deal except you find things like that in almost every sentence and paragraph. Every time he thinks to himself his names long chen but anytime he talks to someone or vise versa it's long tian. another problem instead of using pronouns like he, him, his they use long chen almost every single time. long chen got up in the morning as long chen looked in the mirror. long chen thinking to himself yada yada yada like that. its unbelievably frustrating. Pick a name and stop using it so much it seems like the author believes every time they do there saving a childs life.
So far so good but it has typical xianxia plots save for the somewhat "rare" system. .
If you are an old monster like me who read a lot of novels skip this. Do not waste your time. It is the same cliche prototype novel. Betrayal by his beloved, is now trash, gains opportunities miraculously. There are arrogant young masters, he wants revenge etc. You know how the process is.
So, this isnt in trial read for me any longer, but not in voting either... yet 3 books were picked at the same time, just for ML books....
Dropped, instant started, a screw up?????
Anyone....
It is a great book with a lot of action and character development.
If you are looking for a book that will send you to one world after another and keep the action going with interesting characters then this is the book for you.
Wow! This novel put me in a roller coaster ride! Keagan was diagnose with cancer and live his life to the fullest. YOLO!...Yeah...the Author writes a compelling and interesting story that is a page turner! I juts hope down the line, that Keagan will see the other side of life! The meaningful and rewarding side! So far, he's a energetic and full of mischief! An entertaining novel that put a smile on my face and also shocked me! Good job Author! Keep it up!
Just imagine, What if all this was simply his imagination? His way of coping with the loss of his friend. The tool to fight with his crippling depression.
Among recent Trial this is one of best.
This is gem.
Mc have OP cheat.
Story is quite interesting.
Translation should improve more.
this Novel must pick.
I suggest both old and new reader must try it.
Mc character quite good.
la historia tiene un comienzo presentable, tiene un desarrollo posterior que no es desconocido, sin mucha novedad, es muy apegado a lo estándar de novelas de sistemas, como para complacer a los lectores que gusten de este estilo de lecturas, en cuanto a los supuestos reinos del cultivos y las rarezas de las cosas,plantas, materiales, se nota una desgana en cuanto a su contexto, es decir, son solo nombres vacíos, solo se colocaron como para que quepa en un supuesto de un entorno de mundo de cultivo, por eso no es tan recomendable
raw link please, also is this translated or an original because i cant find raws. comments should not be less than 140 characters.......................