i cant remove it from my libray ist cursed. ITS good tho i News Just a Pause for it
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The biggest problem I have with this is that there is nothing making it stand out. If the novel was a person and the flesh and blood was the characters and world, the person would be a rotting corpse. Furthermore, the bones (plot) wouldn't be bones that were refined in anyway. They would be ordinary and just like all the other persons (stories). I really dislike this so I might be a bit harsh.
I dunno why the author doesn't post this story in webnovel . Posting it here will give you more dollars to buy you chicken dinners than posting it in MTL novels which makes your novel pirated and gives you few dollars worth of cigarettes !!
I really like this novel . Its funny and plot is very good . It is the first story which made me fantasize how good it would be if Lin Fan was real !!
I dunno if the author is seeing this novel but I hope he knows that I love this novel !
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I'm giving this review after reading latest chapter today ie , chapter 276 and I loved it . Please don't stop updating the raws and upload here .
You will get more loyal readers and more dollars !!
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Ah i loved this book so much!!!! It’s different from other books. Please pick this one.……………………
In lOve, is what i am with this story.
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The only reason I'm writing this review is because the author stated that this novel is gonna be the most memorable novel I'll ever read, which I would partially agree if I was able to read pass chapter 14.
But there is one memorable thing about this novel, and it's the amount of bots, so far I counted 8.
My Review: Writing Quality (5/10), Story Development (5/10), Character Design (2/10), World Background (3/10), Cringe (8/10), Edgy (8/10)
Likable Mc: X
Likable side Characters: None
Grammer Level: Middle School
( No hard feelings dude, I'm not hating )
I don't even want to waste time reviewing this novel. Alas I must do so for the betterment of my fellow readers. So here it goes. This novel is...toxic waste. Avoid at all costs.
Could have been a great story,,, but too bad it was short......................... ............................................................
Alekzi asked me to leave a review as a fellow author and as the editor of this novel, and I will be as truthful as possible.
I wanted to read this, as I am a friend to Alekzi, but I couldn't bring myself to do it at first because as an English native, it was difficult for me to deal with the sentence structure. After some chit-chatting, we came to an agreement that I would help him bring the writing up to snuff.
It will take a while, but I'll be doing it as fast as I can for his future readers! Daily released chapters will be edited before posting, and I will tackle the former chapters as I can (:
As for the story itself, I regret not reading this sooner! Even if there are issues with the grammar, Alekzi has had experience from writing many books before this, and he has truly mastered the art of captivation!
The plot of the novel up to current is well thought out, the outline of current and future novel events is meticulously drawn out, and 'almost' every chapter has just enough entertainment to keep you hooked!
Isaac is an intelligent (Not a super genius) character who almost completely lacks prior experience in MMO or VRMMO settings. He doesn't just automatically start as the best in the world as is seen in so many other VRMMO novels, and is actually somewhat outclassed in the earlier chapters.
As White Online isn't set up like any VRMMO that was released previously in this world, his intelligence and lack of video game experience actually assist him in climbing his way up the ranks from the bottom of the barrell!
I have enjoyed my read, and I hope that my work in raising the quality of this novel helps many others enjoy their read as well!
it's a great novel ... quite a bit different from other vr novels ..thanks:) ...............................................................