Massive release
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Chinese – xiexie (shye-shye)
Croatian – hvala (HVAH-lah)
Danish – tak (tahg)
Dutch – dank u (dahnk u)
Finnish – kiitos (key-toss)
French – merci (MEHR-see)
German – danke (dahn-kah)
Greek – efharisto (ef-hah-rees-TOH)
Hawaiian – mahalo (ma-HA-lo)
Indonesian – terima kasih (Tur-EE-mah KAH-see)
Italian – grazie (GRAHTS-yeh)
Japanese – arigato (ah-ree-GAH-toh)
Korean - kamsahamnida (KAM-sah-ham-NEE-da)
Norwegian – takk (tahk)
Portugese – obrigado (oh-bree-GAH-dooh)
Russian – spasiba (spuh-SEE-buh)
Spanish – gracias (GRAH-syahs)
Tagalog – salamat (sa-LAH-mat)
Thai – kop khun (cap-coohn)
With the amount of inconsistencies that the author didn’t go back and fix to chapter 6 I had to drop this.. has an interesting idea but if a author that post the story doesn’t care about his work then why should I?
Simply a trash novel. I thought I had potential , but was incredibly disappointed. MC fighting style is to just let himselfs get hit since his cheat gives him a lot of health.
Has the ability to learn any skill and make it op asf, but never does.
Great story! eagerly waiting for the story to be completed. love the characters and their roles can't wait for the end. Thumbs up to the writer!!!!
The author provides the magical and technological tools mixed, it is a strategy to hook a wide group of readers. Will the author be creative? He needs to use a lot of tools which will be prioritized and which will be used with absurdly simple descriptions. In the end it will dance according to the readers who first rate this book. Are we reading this frankenstein sewing? Hard to say.
Hi, and welcome to my novel :)
I didn't intend to write a review before hitting chapter 1000, however I noticed many comments regarding a certain point. So, I got to edit the novel and write this review to notify you all about what changed :D
The age of the mc and other characters changed from being 8 into 11. I took into consideration all your comments and found them quite logical.
I just ran a fast edit and check on all the +200 chapters of the novel, edited everything I could, and I plan to start a thorough edit later on this weekend.
If you found anything that didn't add up, just write a comment and I'll edit that part ASAP.
Thx for reading my novel, and thx for all the support and love you gave to it. I truly appreciate it.
Have a nice reading and day everyone... See you later at 1k chapter review.
P.S.: If you got any comment or opinion about my novel, just write it down. I take every single comment of yours seriously and may even change the setting of the entire novel based on your words :))
I love this novel.. I've read it before and I had a hard time remembering where did I read it.. of course I can't find it easily because it's a different title...
Raw translation :
Dad: I Was In College and Was Blocked By the Goddess of the School Flower
Praise for the Writer -
BIAKO, I feel you are one of the better writers on this platform though I have not read much books here but after reading both of your original works I know that you sure have innovative thinking and you never let your readers be bored.
About the book -
This book is surely a great work of art and innovative thinking. Three story line of the book is great, what I like the most is the writers way of communicating the ideas / thought by mixing them or should I say developing a storyline around them.
It seems pretty good so far! It is the Indian version of I'm Really A SuperStar! The culture is a little different but the humor is pretty good! Thank you for your hard work and can't wait for the rest!
I spammed a bunch of 5 stars earlier, so this should be fine. Author. Don't you dare get Alvelyn with Loyd. I still remember all the BS he pulled, although Allevian doesn't. Or maybe he does, not sure
I got as far as chapter 11 I know it might be too few chapters before judging, but I doubt it.
Three main issue
1)Too simple
2) Too convenient
3)Too fast-paced.
within 10 chapters, he reaches the 4th realm of cultivation for this world, finds a disciple, and kills all bandits who are at the 2nd realm of this worlds cultivation, helps a city lord from an invasion in which a demonic cultivator of the 3rd realm of cultivation helps said people invading and then while fishing stumble upon the strongest sect master in the country of which the mc than joins said sect all within 10 chapters, chapters are average in length.
Chapter 11 is what killed it for me, I know the system was going to make it easy for the mc but this way too easy all he does is check in every day and it gives him random stuff.
Good points
-writing is alright some words and grammar here and there needs work but it's very readable.
-characters are the strong point of this story the mc is actually fun to read, his little disciple is as well, and their interactions are fun. Even the talking system is cool I know most find them annoying and with good reason, but his system seems to be a cool bro and not a jerk.
This is good, there are limitation for some Male protagonist or how far they can go. But with female protagonist, boys and girls adoring MC, action, weak to strong, and with comedy lol