The minute he joined his mom and became her deciple the story went downhill and became cringe worthy honestly I don’t care for sentimental stories I thrive and enjoy chaos and pure unfiltered evil so this story is not for me I saw the antihero tag and got excited about this but the mc is soft and pitiful nevertheless this story has great Potential and others will enjoy it so don’t take my criticism seriously and keep writing ✍️
this is interesting...
i’ve already done with the 6 chapters and im kinda into it, the way you personas and character interacts and all its worth the read :) but for the action part you can improve it, and i know you can do it :)
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I don't know what's going on here. Maybe I missed something cuz things got supernatural and everyone just takes it like "meh". It gave me a feeling that it was a supernatural world and superpowers are no secret. Unpolished writing and tons of plot holes around. Things seems to be too rushed and characters have no emotions either.
I think it's my first time seeing a sign in (cultivation) novel where mc isn't a thousand years old virgin, where are the raws though? Srsly
Looks good, but it got picked up before all 40 chaps were even released? What is going on here?The other novel that was picked had the lowest view count in the last week trial reads, and now this is being picked with just 30 chaps in. Weird.
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I have read the entire novel beside the last 60 chapters because author the rushed ending and left a cliffhanger.
There are many plot holes, one of which is that mc promise to marry many female lead characters but only married and loved the main female lead making all the previous character development with the others female characters pointless and could only be considered filler for the story. Plus there is alot of filler. Like about 50% maybe more maybe less.
considering that current score is 4.94 for this trash translation, i put 1 star review. novel is ok, but translation is terrible. wrong translations, unfinished sentences, double paragraphs and probably some more mistakes that i havent noticed.
overall think that reading MTL may give better reading experience.
Looks like the translator changed between chapters 40 and 41. The new translator is much poorer than the original translator, which is a shame as I was really enjoying this story.
I hope the translation quality of chapters 41 onwards will improve.
2 months and still 100k views? Yet you still continue even if your story dont even have a rate in two months? Thats enough for me to give u 5 stars