At least change the plot wherein the mc was betrayed and then got reborn before the game was launched. That plot is overused already in many game novels in this site. This novel is cliche and unoriginal in my opinion.
so I'm only on chapter 50 while I write this, I will update later when I read more. so I notice a lot of grammar errors. by that I mean use of the wrong word for example the word taste is never used it's always test and she/he are wrong once and a while. it's not a big deal you know what the author is trying to say. the story is very slice of life at the moment. mostly revolving around the fmc and how she believes every male around her to be an idiot. the male mc doesn't get a whole lot of screen time but when he does he just feels like a push over and I haven't seen a lot of character development with him. it has being mentioned that other people see the emotional struggles he shows but nobody really does anything to help. they just kinda say "oh this other person will help" or at least that's how it feels to me finally I think my review sounded mostly negative but I do think this can be a great novel once the characters grow a little bit. I see a lot of potential in it and I fully believe the author can make that happen.
it is a good one :)................................................................................................................................................................................................................
nice book
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Loved it!
Amazing work from amazing author!
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The 3 chapters are great to read, albeit there is nothing unique about its content yet. I was specially hooked by the well-crafted cliffhanger of chapter 1. Thankfully I did, now I am one of the first reader of this potential starlet. Keep up the good job Author, I hope that the story will continue to get better from here on out. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This was a pretty good story. I of course loved the main characters and their character growths . I was a bit confused during all the fighting towards the end, because they kept jumping from scene to scene but all in all it was a good story. The ending feels a little unfinished, but it also can end there.
SO IS THIS BOOK DONE OR WHAT?? ITS BEEN AWHILE SINCE NEW CHAPTERS WHERE PUT OUT!!
yo this is hilarious, anyone whose searching for a relaxing read give this a try. but not for those who searching literal masterpieces on webnovel. good read author.(only read 40 chapters so far, so rating might change later)
This novel can be describe pretty well with "not bad", wish to read more.
To be fairly honest, all I wish is to fish for "common" novels if I stumble across an "uncommon" or even "rare" novel, that would be great!
Would even say, it made my day! But, because of "trash" novels, nowadays my rating got to the point where this gets a 5, mainly because I'm afraid it won't be picked.
I'm ashamed of myself, I ate (read) too much trash so I have indigestion.
Very good! It's an interesting story. I like heroin, I like the male characters even more! I'm still waiting for FL to interact more with the villain and the Demon Lord!
I really like this novel. The story progression is awesome. And the characters are really unique. Keep up the good work author. I hope to see more chapters uploaded