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Shameless author dropping his 5 star review.
If you guys have any questions? feel free to drop them in comments.
As for @Pandastic66's debate on Harem/Non-harem - TBH, im not clear on the state just yet. we will see how things develop,
Daily releases 6pm
Double release if we hit 200 power stones.
Release schedule? 2ch/d after a few days of this review.
The synopsis is a lie. The MC didn't regress in time, there were no multipliers either, instead it's an enhancing system.
As for the story itself, it's very slow paced from the first few chapters, mostly on the worrying views of the MC himself regarding his environment.
Why not change the title into shock the rune novel became a beast tamer novel i mean after the 90+ ch or after the divine monument arc it literally became a beast tamer novel even the system changed if i remember the system only help the mc comprehend and use any runes but the f after 100+ ch when the the mc beast killed the enemy sparrow it gaved 100 exp whats that? I even remember some scene from other novel being coppied here like the classroom fight I have high hopes from the novel but they just destroyed it
Nice story so far (Chapter 8 and ongoing). The only thing is minor mistakes and you seriously need an AUX chapter for these characters lol.
3.4
Why do I feel like things are happening for no reason? And why did I even read this? Nothing makes sense anymore. Especially the mothers reaction, and how could mc impregnate his own mother?! From what ik its hard to impregnate close relatives (close as in blood relationships)
And mc over here just 1, 2 shots and now, bam. He's got another sibling.
All women in this:
It's early in the story to write reviews, but it's also happening quickly.
The story seems interesting, maybe like a cliche start but I have a feeling that you are a beginner at writing.
The fights were nice, simple, not too long and you didn't include unnecessary long dialogs.
You should definitely improve character design, what are Leyce, Kagusuchi Akane and that guy from academy like, what do they look like etc (same goes to the world where he is, but also his old world).
Besides that, everything seems fine so far, I really hope that the story will have some interesting plots to it.
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If I were to choose one word to describe this novel, I’d described it as a mess. I’m at chapter 180 and it’s like the author doesn’t even remember what he wrote in other chapters. The power balance makes no sense and contradicts itself he mixes up character’s abilities etc its an absolute mess as of chapter 180 not worth 20 or so coins per chapter
A good and interesting novel held back by pointless scenes and sudden drops in MC's IQ. The story is great and it's fun to see the 2 MCs change the world and get rich. Sadly, they don't always seem as intelligent as they should be considering their background in the real world. Writing quality is fine, though you might get irked by sudden mixing of 1st person and 3rd person in a few para. Good luck to the author.
Keeping this short ,this novel has a good beginning,but after chapter 19 ,it got far worse because of the building up for the face slapping.