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It starts off with our stereotypical MC, who is trash and bullied. However after a mysterious encounter with a meteorite he finds that his heart turned into a crystal..........
i don't care how the good this book is BUT THE PROBLEM IS the protagonist is TRAP!!!and there is no warning anywhere saying mc is trap which something most such writers atleast mention somewhere totally ruined my time ,here i thought i would be have a enjoyable read .sigh P S even if u delete this review atleast put it in discription that the protagonist is a trap so atleast u won't ruin other readers mood or waste their time
First time hearing of this never read the original but so far it’s been a blast can’t wait to see where it goes ?.
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it's really good for a novice writer, probably better then any of the stories i've had to write for school. keep working hard and one day you might be able to get 1mil views! although work on explaining the world and just up the writing styles quality a little bit more! BTW i love the first person
trash no intro. no build up just random situation. also the mc (I guess idk) cringe/creepy. stopped at chapter 1 don't even try it it's a waste of time.
I feel like it could definitely have been better in certain areas. But for the most part it was a good. Just wished that they would have mainly made the background better.
https://***.uukanshu.com/b/114371/ Link address for anyone wanting to see the raw, the book itself is good, but I dislike the translations, look at the first chapter of the raw for context, but its because they started out calling him eve, when that wasn't the name first given to him, and the translator also keeps refering to him as He, when a few lines later in the very first chapter, Google Translate says her, and Im pretty sure that isn't an error given how she has titles like Mother God of elves in this tl and Mother nature in the raws, plus Goddess of life.Point is it just feels strange and disconnected.
Good shiih continue maaaan it amazing ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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Website : qidian china Views : 7.93 millionRating : 8.3(1253)Chapters : 472Status : ongoing Word count : 1.40 million Rank : 7Right now it's really popular in qidian.
From chapter 206 this story just isn't fun anymore. Until the 'Faith energy' arc, the protagonist was respectable. He was multi-dimensional; he wasn't a two-dimensional puppet defined by one word (like 'righteous' or 'shameless'). Instead the protagonist was many things: cunning, strategic, patient, utilitarian and capable. Yet this all disappears in chapter 206 when the author quite literally squishes, and remoulds the protagonist's personality so he better fits into the themes of 'justice', 'positive karma', and 'righteousness.' The author goes as far as to hypocritically rebrand every single one of the MC's actions so far, justifying them under the banner of 'good' vs 'evil'. This story was never superb, but it was entertaining. Now the hypocrisy is just down-right sickening.
