Finally a good cultivation story :)This story resembles History Strogest Senior Brother,the mc is smart and thinks twice before making his move ,the comedy is also pretty good, overall a high quality cultivation story.Highly recommend this rare breed of xianxia.
deserves to be continued (better than most other trail novels)In Doane’s debut novel, a young man embarks on a journey of self-discovery with surprising results.An unnamed protagonist (The Narrator) is dealing with heartbreak. His love, determined to see the world, sets out for Portland, Oregon. But he’s a small-town boy who hasn’t traveled much. So, the Narrator mourns her loss and hides from life, throwing himself into rehabbing an old motorcycle. Until one day, he takes a leap; he packs his bike and a few belongings and heads out to find the Girl.ignore this:
Author, I think someone is copying your novel. He changed names but the entire story is same. Novel name is "Dual Cultivation with system" by MythicalCreatures.
It is a decent story however due toIt seemingly being dropped at chapter 40 for nearly a year with noUpdates from the author, there is no reason to waste time reading past chapter 20 if you even start reading it in the first place.
i would definitely recommend others to read this story. it has piqued my interest. from what i have read so far, it takes the story to slowly build.
This story reminds me of a movie that i love called "Brewster's Millions" the movie is about a failed baseball player that gets an inheritance from a relative he never knew existed. This story has nothing to do with baseball but in the movie the MC is given two choices take a million dollars now or take 30million and try and spend it all in 30 days with out acquiring any assets. So he has to be penny less by the end of the 30 days to win the real inheritance of 300million dollars. With on those 30days The MC has a hard time spending his money because he starts spending it on things he thinks are dumb stuff but those dumb stuff ends up making him money.That's what this MC does as well. The MC takes over an existing body of a prodigal. And to not arouse suspicion he acts like a prodigal. The body he took over is extremely sick and with a really small di ck. So since he cant get with women and a slightly strong breeze can push him over. He tends to do nothing but spend his extremely rich parents money.The new MC try's to keep with that tradition especially since he got a system that will help heal him as he spends money. While The MC starts to purchase allot of items and property that to most people looks like a waste of money as well as the MC, It turns in to a gold mine. Everything he spends money on just trying to waist money for the system quest ends up making him millions back, with out him trying to. Same with the MC in "Brewster's Millions" both there goals is to spend the money. They are not thinking about making it, it just so happens to work that way. It's like his luck lvl is Maxed out.Allot of people don't like it because of the MC's attitude and how he treats his parents but they way i see it is hes just acting like how the original person in that body would. He never really talked back to his parents he more so acted like a 9 year old kid begging his mom and dad for some money to buy a toy. It's a fun read. So if you can get threw like the first 30 chapters where he just seems to spend money and not make it. Past that is when the fun happens, at least for me anyways.
While I do like the story..it's feels like it was made for kids..the time spent describing the event that happen in the Mac's school is way more than the dedication the time actually spent on improving the story development wise..i feel like whatever happened since Chapter 1-69 has no bearing on the story and it's something that can just be said in passing. I have only read up until this point but don't really feel the excited to continue.While it's sometimes exciting, you are immediately doused with water after 2 or 3 chapters
Absolutely intriguing! Definitely waiting for more quality chapters. Giving a big thumbs up to the author! The MC is just so OP already! I can't wait to know more.
I did like this Novel and thought this has Potential.....but then there was chapter 20 and completely ruining the Novel becouse how out of character Mc is and how cringe it was
Qidian China stats:Rating : 9.3 (154 votes)Chapters : 1024 Status : finishedWritten in 2007~2009702.6 million total clicks437.07 million words
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It’ a good story which gives off a similar feel to reincarnation of the strongest sword. If you liked it then you would probably like this too. The characters are fleshed out and your not overwhelmed with too many characters at the start with a gradual increase. I’m about 50 chapters in and it feels like it’s only been 10 the progression of the story is gradual but in a good way as the author takes more time to develp the story before rushing into the plotThere’s a lot more I could go on about but I’d rather keep reading so you’ll have to check it out for yourself.