There is a lot to say about this novel. Think the author don't have a lot of experience writing novel. So, I'm going to make it my job to comment as much as I can on the mistakes he makes.
The story: The story development is kind of too fast. 50 chapters in, and he seems like he's unbeatable. Also, what kind of bs is this when the mc asked for the mysterious orbs from the auction boss and the boss agreed just because the mc won the stare-down. Isn't the mc suppose to be grateful that he is saved by the boss?
Character design: The characters are fine, no problems with it. Just not that great enough to get a five star.
World Background: ...Seriously, author? So far, I have not seen any explanation about the levels and the power catalogs and stuff like that. There should be like, Level 1-10, regular human stats to Olympic champions stats. Level 20-30, surpass human limits. So on, so forth. After reading a lot of chapters, I didn't get any in depth information about the worlds and people's abilities.
Not trying to roast the author or criticize on no bases, just trying to give some constructive criticism to the author.
I just have to say, WOW
I'm about two chapters in and will definitely come back for more! The comedy in this one is gold! The writing is clean, just a few missed punctuations and capitalizations. A great read!!
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I love it! I think the first few chapters could still use a bit of fixing, but later into the story you can really see how much has the author improved! Let’s just hope the story will continue to be so good!
This book is freaking awesome but I do think it could use some improvement. I am glad I read this, the story is worth it. I can see dramatic improvement in how the author wrote this year compared to two years ago.
I’m going to keep this short.Author forgets who died and the rules established for the MCs system.These two things alone ruin the immersion, but there’s more the cultivation levels are never really explained, the techniques are a little easy to get and if they usually are not seeing a bunch show up at auction should be sus.Just not really good, having a story centerered around an Auction house was a cool idea though
The story has a lot of potential and it is gonna go far. I love the MC and the concept of the story. I am really intriuged so far by how the story is going. Good job author
MC gets an op absorbing ability, only absorbs like 2 things. Constantly loses until he comes back, loses again, then comes back and plot armor kicks in. Disappointing.
Predictable and cliche. If you are expected real character then you better look somewhere else. Even had the cliche scene of entering a store like a broke person then showing up some randoms that talked trash for going into the store. Like I understand it's modern but why does everyone talk so unnaturally. ugh
Author-san shameless 5 star review.
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