Really really really really good. I beg the webnovel gods to pick this up.
I just love the plot story line and the characters it like one of my fav shows i can't wait for more if you are new to reading check out this book 100 percent mostly if you are in to cooking
This is not a bad story but it is very childish. Even though author state that this story is for children but I think it is too childish. Even children book like Harry Potter write in a way that can be read by both children and *****. I just think that you have a very good plot to be develop but you waste it.
Have any of you ever read a book that breathes? One that jus took seemed realistic enough to take a life on its own? Because this is one of them. I am not saying this as an exaggeration. I mean it as it stands, as I find this book incredible and much more deserving of views.Let me preface this by saying, I did not play the original game it was ‘based’ on. I also use the word based loosely, just as this book takes a story on its own, and there was no need for any backgrounds info or experience from the original source, and I was immersed by the time I was at Ch 12-13.Now, the grammar is great. Indisputably so. It is a sight for sore eyes on this side laden with bad syntax. As for the characters, I do love a Main who is willing to be ruthless when it counts. We all know that’s a ***** hero isn’t interestingly anymore, but I have read many originals which try to skew as far away as possible, turning our Main into a hateful massmurderer, which in my opinion is worse. This book finds an acceptable (even interesting and innovative, I think) middle ground between altruistic superman and homicidal maniac.For the world building, I quite honestly don’t know which is original and which has its origins in the game. So although lovely I will refrain from any comments. But what I can judge is the interactions between the characters in the world, there conversations, attitudes, relationships, and I can say that I feel submerged in a world that is not earth.What I do struggle with, but that is really small, is the writing style as sometimes I find the same words repeated over in a narrative passage (a personal ire taught to me since elementary school). But let us be real, it would not be a problem in the myriad of different, much worse, originals, so it won’t be one for me here either. You know what the say, when everything’s perfect, the mistakes just turn more glaring, and what would never ge an issue in mediocrity can be in great works. So I will leave my review at 5 stars. No less, no more.I think this may have gotten me into si-fi ^^’
That is a lot work for fried chicken. But seriously the beginning makes me craving fried chicken lol.Anyway, I like it. This feels like a light-hearted story but eventually became a serious (business story?) one. I give solid 5* and a bucket of fried chicken to the author
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A very nice novel if you're looking for a change of pace from the usual overused cliché that everyone is copy pasting with slight differences. If i had to classify the novel I'd be a slice of life novel instead of the full action novels with little to no development where we don't see how the mcs actually level up or the hardships they go to breakthrough. Here we have what most wuxia/xianxa readers are really looking for a nice paced novel with good development and with rationality instead of the young master syndrome.
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Very good pleas keep writing.
All for brother....This is the best original novel I had ever read..even the last wish system is shut in front of this novel...May the darkness bless your novel