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"A contestant? Are you seriously do not have anyone more competent than this pathetic man? Ha Ha Ha, I didn't know the Wing Sect are this weak." He is going to throw more mockery when a shout stops him.
I still see your shadows in my roomCan't take back the love that I gave youIt's to the point where I love and I hate youAnd I cannot change you so I must replace yo
this is book is really an interesting thing to spend your time on
this is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will there be any yuri in the harem not a fan
Well~ I kind of forgot the story .. So, that's good ..
Great story so far! I can't wait to see how it progresses.
Sci-fi isn't really my thing but this particular book is mind blowing. The synopsis was obviously the first thing that gripped me then came the prologue, truly exquisite. Keep up the good work author.?
WOW! SCI-FIC MY FAOVRITE.I loved this book.It is written so well and great. The plot is so thrilling that it hooks you more and more.Excelling mc.This book should be read by allGREAT WORK AUTHORGOOD LUCK
nice story bro, i like the way you put even the tiniest detail to your story. I like the way you put some cliffhanger to the end of the chapter. keep it up bro, I will wait for the next chapter
All around a great novel really lovr the story and the characters, also you usee my name in one of your chapters so that deserves 5 stars alone.
Awful grammar, flat characters, cliche situations and encounters directly from xianxia, inconsistency everywhere. Most abilities are used once or NOT EVE ONCE before being not just forgotten, but deleted. After all the time spent reading their descriptions. First chapters is basically a wikipedia copypaste while later ones are simply not making sense. And the plot holes the size of a galaxy. Oh, and don't get me started about chess-related stuff. As a CM, I was cringing till I dropped despite previously wanting to check just how deep this rabbit hole is. I'm really wondering about those five star reviews through. Oh,and I judging by comment, negative reviews are deleted. Good job.
friend and I read all your novels, and I can only tell you that I have seen how much you have improved, but the reason for my comment is to tell you about something that I find that you fail, which is when describing appearances, you only say boy "x" is handsome or charming. if you could describe some features eye color or something would be perfect
