A very interesting story indeed! It's quite nice seeing steampunk/cyberpunk novels here where cultivation, system, and magic are more prominent. Kudos to the authors who updates twice a day! That's a feat. Highly recommended! I've got no problem with the grammars, very smooth language, and for the story progression, well I've got to read more to see... Update the synopsis maybe? and the cover, the two things that catch the reader's eyes yeah? >u<
An amazing that you just can’t get enough of! the ability to have the Mc have a high intelligence and comedic personality without being to overpowered, while maintaining a good plot to the story and having diverse set of characters is an amazing act of itself. Highly recommend
A ripoff of the original. NOT ONLY A RIP OF BUT A DIRECT COPY. WORD FOR WORD. Try writing original stories instead of copying others. -_-
Oh god how long do I have 2 wait for the next chapter to update I really like the story especially new female lead with male lead to gather love them both a lot and his cute little brother with his wife hoping for happy ending
Hooked so far...Keep up the great work! I like the originality of this, and would like to see more. Great job and good luck writing! The plot is interseting so I think I'll keep it.
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A sci Fi so easy to understand. well written and fast paced.keep up the good work
I see music, I vote. Synopsis is pretty confusing but ehhh it's music!! That's definitely a great reason for you to vote for a novel. I have high hopes for you, young man. (or novel?? lol)
it is the best book I will read for months and years to come. I love books like this where the mc should be able to become a master of all the best
Looks good so far, a very fun start, an interesting MC, good plot, all I need to add something to my library but on top of that the grammar is pretty good too! Thanks for the hard work Author!
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Storyline it's okay background world seems good to. Will see what next ?.!!