Tis not bad and to be honest, it's better than some that I've seen on here so I'll give this story a fairly good rating mostly because the plot isn't bad, but it's also generic. But overall it is ok....at least to me
Just wanted to thank everyone for joining me in this book, and also, at the same time, give myself one more 5 star review....It was fun, and all my readers were a blast...Hope you'll continue reading this new authors work.... this was a three month journey, and every chapter was extremely enjoyable... Hope you'll enjoy the read if you're still reading it.... *sad author waves
This is an honest review. I really like what has been done so far and I cannot wait for more. This story is unique in how it defers from the usual transmigrate/pickup system plot. The system (treasure chests) is definitely refreshing and the MC is OP but not overly so. The MC is not some flat, ugrade obsessed virgin, but he has “character” has a relationship that adds significantly to the plot in addition to the MC’s own plans. This MC is able to evolve as the story progressess, changing plans as he goes along. There is still some much room left to grow for this story and the possibilities are endless. I really am excited for what is to come. You won’t regret, and it is definitely worth, at least giving this story a solid try. So come along with me for the ride and journey the awaits ahead in the uncertain but bright furture.________This is one of my first real reviews of a novel. I really hope you enjoy this as much as I have. And if you dont like or agree with what is said, please let me know so that I can gain a better perspective on what others may think of this novel. As well as my novice but, never the less, honest review?
'same old cliche novel with extra cliche on top of it'- that's my genuine thought about this novel.trash mc and stupid forced plot!
great start very promising waiting for new chapters .,..............................................,,..........................................hope it gets picked up.
Looks good keep up the good work! Looks good keep up the good work! Looks good keep up the good work! Looks good keep up the good work! Looks good keep up the good work!
SLOW!!!!! TOO SLOW PACED!!!!!
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Hi author here, till chapter 9 I will try to lay down the foundation for mc and after that I will start to develop character and world.Please try and bear with the writing.As for Indian characters, i am an indian and would like to promote the culture of India( I really dont have much knowledge of chinese culture)thank you, and appreciate you guy's viewership.
As others have said, it is kind of a discount Sword Art Online. I only got to chapter 9 by this point, but I am going to drop it. The part I dislike the most, is that the game mechanics are hardly touched in the beginning. That is a big reason I like video game novels, there is a power standard and quantifiable growth, but these stats seem arbitrary. Movement speed is the biggest flag: he has 7 movement speed and run. (Successfully) from a monster with 20 movement speed. There is no indication that the monster has to make a detour around trees or something, but he out-runs it just fine.
Pretty good story, though the novel is not helped by the misleading title. The story is basically about a summoner who can't control his summons, so he is pretending to be a video game to get his summons to do what he want. It's pretty different from the usual gamers in another world stories.
entire thing just from world trigger does not deserve all of these 5 stars just plagiarism, what a let down.