Apparently my repeated cries for urgency brought about the required response as the minicab driver expertly drifted into the parking bay in record time. Haphazardly shouting my thanks as I sprinted towards the departure lounge, (paying via the app really helped,) before taking a nervous glance towards my watch whilst running headfirst across the pedestrian crossing, (definitely not actions I usually condone for you over-critical traffic-safety warriors out there.) Jesus it's already 7:45pm, only 15 minutes left until Eve's flight depart.
The bottle was intact.
An Sun who was unconscious, knitted his brows together when Rin cleaned around his wound. Rin noticed and quickly softened her movements. She pursed her lips tightly and the depths of her eyes turned solemn.
The shiny red feathered bird finally stopped speaking as it came face to face with a veiled girl. Forgetting its earlier indignation, the red bird tiptoed towards Jun Lan while curiously observing the latter's dressing with its large round golden eyes.
The magician shook off leftovers his armor. He was angry at himself for letting himself be caught up in such a childish trick.
He was surprised to discover that the feeling was just as strong while giving a kiss than receiving one. It also solidified the belief in his heart that he liked her a lot.
- "Juno Formation"- he ordered and their subordinates immediately switched their patterns of attackafter surrounding Skywalker.
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Nice story need more Can u plz add more chapters
Great story, good writing quality but wish the chapters were longer. Decent world building but the character’s path of growth doesn’t entirely make sense until you get further in. He worries about his immediate survival which makes sense while also trying to build up into he desired class/build type. I like how he is strong and growing quickly without becoming too overpowered too quickly. While I do love a good overpowered story, it’s only when it’s done by a good author. Like this one. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
The novel at the beginning was alright, you could see the basic premises of where the story will go but around the end of volume 1 it got.... boring. The multiple povs and showing the future is what dissapointed me the most, idc bout your crappy english im reading the story to see how far the protagonist will go and not the future of the protagonist. Honestly I thought Earth 2 would have the same structure as Earth Prime but it didnt. Now theres heros wtf? Lord Shadow became a hero? When he first arrived at Earth 2 and destoyed the meterorite he was called the Dark Knight but then in like 2 chapters hes called by a ****ty name and now theres a rich guy using his blood to create super soldiers. *Sigh* The beginning was good it wasnt great but I held on because I thought this novel was different. I was right. It became boring.P.S - (This is just me rambaling on but yeah) Dont use caps when the system is showing something, its hard to read, use brackets it shows that you at least care but how much you present yourself. Also whats with showing all his skills, pillars and items at once (dont know cause I always skiped it when he showed the status) it looks stupid, use sections and sub sections. Have you not read video game novels? The author shows great care in there work by putting brackets in when the system is doing something. I mean why would you use caps when the system is talking, its hard to read as well as the fact that its ugly. Have you never proof read your work?
this is one of the best books I have read in a while. Highly recommend it.