CulturedDaoist69
This is definitely an interesting read, the main story isn't anything insane, but the way it's told makes you quite interested in learning more about it. Definitely would suggest a read.
I had high hopes for this novel. The story development and character design is below average. It simply has no taste in short, I don't know why someone recommended me this
I hope you all enjoying it as much as I enjoying writing it! Don't forget to comment and rate! I love feedback and my reader's reactions.
Like for likesNeed likes and I am sure not the only one.Let’ Karma it upBook is a good read as well.
Hello, shameless review from the Author. I can't give myself full marks as my english is far from perfect. However, i hope you will be able to enjoy this story despite its shortcomings.
Here are a few more informations about this novel.
I read many webnovels, from eastern/ western fantasy, to apocalypse stories, with System and Video-games sub-genre from time to time. After reading so much, i have developed a vision quite precise of what i'm seeking for in a story.
The start of this story is slow, with maybe too many info blocks in the first few chapters, but it will only improve after.
Survival, System and Apocalypse are the dominant themes. However, you will find at some point similarities (but very different in the facts) with other webnovels like Devil's Cage, Terror infinity and Ultimate evolution. The difference is that it will only be one aspect of the story.
There is one central Romance, no Harem. There will potentially be several love interests in the story, but as in real life we meet people and things happen or not.
As a Survival story, there is a Game of Throne/ Walking Dead feel that can't be avoided. Not everyone can survive but the deaths are not distributed like candies either.
At last, i attach a lot of importance to coherence. If you notice any incoherences, don't hesitate to point it out. It will be quickly fixed.
Main character is an ass. Not in the good way. He's a whiny annoing bipolar as **** *****. Now if anyone wants to tell me anything about how he is this great character who truly cares. Just shut up right now. The author wrote a fucking terrible character and did one of the worst cases of character assasination i have ever seen with Sophia. What the hell
This is a great book with so many plot twists and the occasional moments of the MC being a savage, which I love. I also like that the MC is a very smart person who isn't trusting, and I also like the relationship he has with his younger sister.
Overall a good story. A matter caution, there isn't much action in the early going in this story. Starts to increase a bit somewhere in the 40s. Spends a lot of time talking about his cultivation process. I like it, but it may not be for everyone.
This book feels like coming home after a long day at work.
It's relaxing, calming and soothing. Like a walk through the woods, or the feeling of having submitted an assignment and no longer having to worry.
To anyone who would like to EXPERIENCE a well-writen story that leads you by the hand in an extremely pleasant manner, then this is the story for you.
I can only hope the future content continued to be the same level of excellence as this has been.
Nice, Keep updating and I would give it a five-star rating. Everything is good going but, update it faster and regularly. I hope you will work it out!!!
The novel is rushed, the world building isn't there, the characters including the MC are stale, just mention he/she is there and that's it. the numbers are all over the place, one chapter it said he gained 100 million energy points, next chapter he has 20million, one time he has some weird stats named flame intensity at level 2 the next one it is lvl9 or something... he gains powers without explaination or reason like he got "godly" seeds or something OUT OF NOWHERE and nothing to explain how the feck does the flame even have those things on it's person without burning it to the ground... plus the fact that they are special and can be planted into barren earth and somehow still bear food... I mean even fanfictions are written better than this novel honestly...This feels like a cheap novel with nothing interesting about it other than the initial concept.
