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I enjoyed this book a lot. I feel this is a must read. The characters were well developed to the point that I was able to feel their pain and joys. I look forward to the next book to see how they are going to resolve their feeling for each other. I also am looking to see how the sister will play a role in this story.
I like the story, it's pretty interesting. But holy god not sure if it's the author or the translator, but something is seriously wrong. Especially when it gets to about CH. 237, it's like paragraphs are just missing and the quality of translation drops further with grammar errors etc. Not to mention later on the translator decides to chop chapters into three separate chapters instead of one long chapter.
Your writing quality is superb. I love the way you describe the characters. The fact that he has a debt to pay and that his debtor's sold him reminded me of how brutal some debtor's are. The synopsis is short, but straight to the point and I like that. Overall, a great job considering it's only 8 chapters. All the best, author!
Loving this story so far! The thing I really like about this story is that the cultivation is explained well. Many cultivation novels do a terrible job of explaining the cultivation ranking system but not only does the author go into depth about how things work, but the addition of a system makes it really easy to understand. I can't wait to see what happens once Young grows stronger. Can't wait to see what happens next!
New novel. I had no motivation to write the next chapter of oaa so i will use this novel as a something to help my writers block.
This novel will be more slower paced, at least in the beginning, and will have more slice of life.
This novel follows Damian, who returns to the past with a power. Hypnosis. With this power he will do all that he can to reach his goals.
the writing is good, story progression is good, I feel cheated by the fact that every paid chapter has the equivalent of half of it being the previous chapter. it seems as though the author is just padding the word.
Is there going to be harem or no? thank u.
Really good novel but really slow story development at the current rate it would take a thousand chapters by the time story gets to mid story , hoping the author could speed up
it was ok first 40 episodes. then when it starts taking your money, everything turns into mtl. so save your money, and just read mtl outside webnovel. :)
5 chapters in and it's already amazing. I came for the yanderes but it's way much more than just that. It has an actual story and doesn't just focus on the characters. Amazing read overall