Very stale and cleche mc is retarded and ruins story a good concept though trash lkmit trash limtinbjnnnnnnh fleeing Biden green bruh nuff gift gift but then Nanking funky drug
I will start from the beginning ;)
The cover page is original and catchy!
The storyline is interesting, the main character also. You're doing a good job!
On Webnovel I saw a lot of stories about zombies, monsters, ect... you've picked up a very difficult topic ;) I wish you an inspiration and a lot of great ideas so you could handle the topic well!
All the best!
Story is amazing with an immortal character whose gone through life in interesting ways. He didn't start out as some god he suffered 90,000 years of loniless and torment. Before making his family and did I mention he absorbs other Mutants powers. He also ain't no simp MC he gets them girls but isn't like every Mc in harem story seducing ever woman he sees. The romance build up happens naturally and there's a good amount of detail on his past and the overall history of this parallel earth and his interaction in it over the past 100,000 years. Goes into a fair amount of detail around the world and its interactions shows a lot of emotion but still keeping it hilarious. The action scenes are incredible a lot of fighting and Mc is brutal. Has a wide cast of characters who play important roles whether it be in his past or in the present and how they defined him. Including on why he's attending a super high school occasionally rest of time he's traveling the globe. The Mc also loves trolling people It shows he intreracted with famous historical figures and people from legends his growth as person and his desire to die but being unable. This world is full of mutant characters. If I were to describe it those Universe is like the X-Men universe and a fantasy world had a kid who then had a kid with Sci Fi Elements and had Martial Arts/Wuxia ancestry.
I've seen dense MCs, I've seen stupid naive MCs. I've seen obsessively idiotic MCs. But this MC takes the stage above all other BETA MCs. And he is actually the fkng alpha. Nice premise and good background story. I don't know why but the author turned this MC so dense he cannot even understand his beard was never liked by the females even if they say it in face. Wow, talk about living in denial so much. Tunnel vision is heavy in this guy.
The real story begins after chapter 70, Before that is boring and unnecessary rubbish that is not worth reading and can be summarized in one sentence "Double class are best and you can learn many spells.!!"
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I can learn a lot from this and it gave me a new perspective in how other people interact (Is a NEET...JK) my bro, update soon please. Kept my boredom off and I certainly made time to read, although I needed to sit otherwise, I'll fall off the stairs. (っ´▽`)っ
The idea of this novel is very unique and the plot is unlike anything I've ever read before. The synopsis also made me feel curious. Overall, I believe there needs to be an improvement in your writing but you have great potential. Keep writing!
Title: Clow Cards Cardcaptor\\库洛牌的魔法使
Rating: 8.9(410)
Status: 1101(Ongoing)
Start Date: 2017-05-04
No. of works: 1
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This book has alot of potential and is professionaly writen. The grammar is superb, I would recommend this book. I am supprised more people haven't read this masterfully written book.
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It is a good story and i really liked how story is developing . I highly recommend u guys to read it once or just give a try to this story For me i liked this story and ofc the all characters and character development