“People, when killed, would die”(Ch.2)
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Hais..miss those days where the mc and his friends mess with each other planning to create an event everyday so that they can receive more gifts from the other sects.
does it drop?
193 - roll credits +1 sin
Seriously a powerful couple. I love female lead how she got able to lead her whole clan. She is cool. And i like how the story is going. Loving it
Author, Well done! keep it Up!
This is the first novel that made me to create a review. It is realy amazing. Reading this slower story progression novel without nonsens filler chapters just to unnaturaly prolong the story is refreshing. There are still some things that can get better in my oppinion, but since the story is still in the beggining Author probably plans to add it over time.
Pros:
Nice slower story progression that is not boring at all.
More details on crafting(alchemy) not just, fight, get stronger, fight rutine.
Unique compared to other novels
you will read it in one breath
Cons:
Not much realy, short for now, especcialy with the slow progression this novel will shine brightly after 400+ maybe 500+ chapters
I am one of those readers that hates when there is a chapter from the point of side character instead of MC, that you dont care about, this is not an issue here cause everything is from MC perspective BUT! this meens side characters are shallow and you dont care about any at all.
Since is slow paced a bit more chapters per week would be great.
Suggestions:
Add few chapters with side characters as main BUT make them talk about the MC or do things for him. So it will not be just a filler chapter and it will be still about MC but it will help us get to know the character of side characters :)
Romance, this realy need slow progression romance with one or 2 females with a twist or tragedy. (I hope you already plan something like it to make story deeper)
Since he is alchemist maybe you can get To more details with herbs collecting too or make him build his own special herb garden that he can improve and care about, that will add so much envy with eldes and lots of content + world building.
I hope you like this review.
currently at ch 34. below average story. The author tries to portray mc as a thinker and intelligent person, but he is stupid. showing off way too much, instead of remaining low key
Do you know how a lot of people complain about OP characters not having any substance? this is NOT that! the plot is SO THICC. the characters are memorable and feel alive. The Mc has common sense and doesn't ever NOT do something the for BS plot reasons (You know when a characters has an ability that would solve gis problems but doesn't use it because the plot needs him to struggle or whatever? none of that) also 190 chapters in and a ship had finally sailed all and all 9½/10
When are you returning from hiatus, author?
i really didn't expect much at first but i have to admit this was really a hidden gem the first 20 chapters are so good that even if the story turned trush afterward the story would still be good the author really has talent for taking a cliché and adding a twist the changes the whole thing.
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deleted last review cause of inappropriate words..... so here I go with some manners.
great novel, intriguing premise of a drunken faced mc.
all 45 chapters in. love the way you handled the mc origin story, detailed but not rushed or any info dump, it showed he's drive and what made him lin donghai and it transitioned well into his next world
great combo of brain and brawn
swell guy, never a dull moment around the kid the underworld ride. doesn't stink of self righteousness.
great read, and an advice for author 2 words