Amazing story. The most unique thing about this story is that it is written by a Pakistani and written in Pakistani style. Good luck author in writing more novels in future
Quite a good book with an interesting Mc, Fml, and other characters. The writing quality while not perfect is better than the majority on this sight, but perhaps this is just my opinion.Story development definitely not fast but interesting as I can see a great picture growing in the background.Stability should be more than now, but we can only hope the author will increase updates.All in all, I recommend everyone to at least try it as I don't feel it is a waste of time at all.
MC is too insecure about his own looks to have any male pets and of course has to have multiple pretty female pets. It really makes me think there is going to be some harem stuff with his pets later on and that makes me uncomfortable.The story seems okayish, a bit slow and a bit random.The characters seem a bit unpolished and maybe stretched to fit a mold.All in all, it's fine for some mindless reading but I have no hope for this becoming something that can really grip my interest. I have only read 19 chapters so keep that in mind.
Writing this halfway through Volume 1 - Part 2!!Sooo, I'm pretty happy with how the book is going so far! There have been a couple of rewrites, so the quality should be pretty high for a Webnovel! But, better than that, as the book goes on, it gets better (trust me!)Thing start off a little slowly, as we build the world, but once it gets going, it reaaaallly gets going. There's a lot of potential where things are now, so I hope you'll make it to as far as I've written! I've had a lot of fun writing it.
This one is pretty good. Looking forward to it. I am supporting this novel before it became super famous and becomes everyone's favourite novel.
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Well I got to the chapter that is released for free so I will give an honest criticism about this story.
About the world: history has much to explore, since in 39 chapters the protagonist has not yet left his tower to explore and is only aware of practically two races that appeared near his tower.
Based on that, history still has a lot to offer and explore.
Development of the Story: the protagonist carries with him a tower leveling system (which is not very weak but is also not OP) where practically everything the protagonist will do will revolve around this tower system.
The flow of the story progresses very slowly where the problem that the protagonist has with the werewolves in (Chap. 2) has not been even close to solving in (Chap. 39).
I believe that the biggest problem in this story is the first 10 chapters where it appears that some details are missing or that something was skipped.
Example chapter 1 itself
The protagonist takes everything as if it were the logic of a game (where it gets to be irritating at a certain point) and also the protagonist's own attitudes are quite questionable. Your decisions and attitude makes you wonder if the protagonist really has an ***** mindset.
In short, a cowardly protagonist with a sense of inferiority who apparently never goes to hand his women.
2/5 star in character just because of the incompetence of the protagonist.
Details aside: the story is from Harem where in 39 cap the protagonist already has 4 girls. The story also has a lottery system (Gacha) very seen in a mobile game so the protagonist must get more allies (girls) from that system.
Ridiculously childish character and the story is very poorly written. At least attempt to learn the language you want to write in before publishing.
I'm fairly certain the author has never touched a woman, and it is really reflected in the way he writes; it's mostly logic straight out of bad hentai.
As for the people complaining about r.a.p.e, well, just look a Greek mythology. A God of Lust would not necessarily be beneath such things.
The Story is really amazing and due to the fact that the MC is not Reincarnated and we see him go through trial and error btw he is not really binded by human morals because he was raised by a spirit beast so you may see him being cruel and so on probably but that's how he was raised but he does have a bit of humanity left and it's amazing how the mother (spirit beast ) cares for him as though he wasn't adopted and tries her best to give him a great future and he has no problems killing someone
This is Brandon Gould writer of the book Demonsong i am respong to a request for a review. if you review my book. i read all of your book and i enjoyed it. the charters could use some devloping but all in all it was a interesting story and hope to see that review for my book Demonsong
It's a fantastic fantasy story. I love the characters. Plot is intriguing and not boring. This is perhaps the best magic story here in webnovel.
the only way to describe how good this is would be the meme of Gordon Ramsay saying "finally, some good frickin food." I. LOVE. THIS. NOVEL. ☆☆☆☆☆