While the translation team itself is doing great, the story itself has issues. Seems very jerky, no smooth transition from chapter to chapter there is always some sort of short time skip so that the author doesn't have to explain something.
While the character was raised on a dangerous planet, he had a father figure for a time and spent time with others in VR but he acts crazed and dangerous when he meets people in real life.
It is cool that everyone has a mech but it is never explained why those who aren't in the military nees them.
Finally no actual story line the character jumps from plot to plot without completing anything
A supreme being had died in the immortal world.....this is the title and I think mere looking at the title, it kinda pissed me off and I think ion like it.....................
Link : https://book.qidian.com/info/1013477299
Chinese title: 医路坦途
Date started: -----
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Chapters: ~ 672
Word count: 184.4 million
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Seems readable now. I remember it was quite different when I came across this last week. A good change at least. The story's interesting. Gone are obnoxious young lads! Looking forward for future chapters.
I love the story, and it has a very good concept behind it, but stories where the mc gets dominated by his wife is not for me. I get that he would do anything for them but to me you can love your girl but still wear the pants in the household.
The story is good and interesting, but mr author why do you have the same book twice the era of evolution and the new world are the same? And what your upload schedule?
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Oh man, this is such a great read! Where do I start? The premise itself is so interesting and fun.
The world-building is nicely done, in depth and detailed and from the first few chapters we already get a sense of where the story is heading.
The characters, honestly I love them all, a great ensemble, even if there are bad ones, the author gives them depth and tries to justify their reasons.
The story itself has a mixture of everything, adventure, comedy, action and romance. Never thought Id say this but id like to see more romance haha
Altho I do appreciate the characters pov change, i feel like its a bit disconnecting to the reader if we stray away from the protagonist too long.
Or this might just be a story with multiple protagonists at this point, which works!
The writing style is simple yet descriptive and easy to follow! I really like it and the dialogue pops out but just a small complaint of mine, might be just my preference, but I wish author wouldnt just put dialogue as it gets a bit confusing as to whos saying sth.
It might be beneficial to add a 'daren said' or other character said.
All in all, great work and Im really amazed by your uploads and hard work!
Hello writer! I loved his webnovel and would like to accompany Vlad in many other chapters. please if you are able to post more. I can't wait to see where this story can take us. A hug from Brazil.
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