petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Just caught up to the latest chapter.Can't wait for more.Writing Quality: Some grammar stuff. You can understand what is being said. Nothing too jarring, just needs a couple of passes for refinement/tidying up.Updates: Just caught up, so don't know the schedule. But the author seems to keep the readers in the know with Author's notes.Story Development: Standard gaming stuff. New game comes out, MC and friends start playing, dungeons/quests, meet new friends, repeat, etc. Mostly in-game progress, not much IRL progress except for mandatory logouts/rests.Characters: MC seems good. Has some quirks that his friends understand/playfully use against him. He has a history that I would like to know more of.Roommates need more fleshing out. But that maybe due to the MC not wanting to pry into his friends' personal lives.New set of guildmates have been introduces, will see how they mesh with everyone else.World Background: Standard VRMMORPG. Hyper-Intelligent Learning AI. NPCs that look/act real. Different areas/severs for every nation.
This review is to explain the stat spam I have at the bottom of every chapter.It's not there to fill a word count. It's there for the readers and myself to refer to information about the main character and the world at any time. That way, I don't forget things like I have for The Ancients World. It does take up the majority of words, but I only write 750 words a chapter for my nonexclusive stories on Webnovel.I'm never going to sign a story to this site again or any other. That being said, if you want to read ahead, then visit the P-a-t-r-e-o-n. The stat spam will make many of you mad, but I don't care. I write around 2 and a half books worth of words a month, and I don't think you can comprehend that workload. It was double at one point, but I've cut back on the words per chapter/page for my own mental health and sanity. Hope this review explains something.
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good read ....…...........….It is on my reading list now .…...................…...................…......…...........…........…..............?
??????Incredible!?????? Don't you dare stop this novel, or I will hunt you down until the end of the world!????????????????????????
This one of those novels that are very smooth reading. The story flows and is doesn ’t have derogtory sweeping statements. The MC has growth and reasons for his actions that make him very likable. The only problem so far is that there has been no new updates for months.
For now (20 chapter ) it is interesting... story is well written.I hope he doesn't copy or do same thing as his previous Novel.for I will rate this Average...........
I have to say I love this fan fic the author has done something totally different keep up the great work
The reason it is different the author doesn’t just copy the show which some people do thanks for your great story
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
gShort Title : UCICORSP
Alternate Title : 不能修仙的我只有去培育魂宠了
Status : Ongoing
Author : Summer Harp
Genre :
Fantasy, Xianxia
The former great monk Wang Che in Wonderland failed to cross the catastrophe, and his soul shuttled to a world of martial arts where soul beasts and humans live in peace.
After confirming that this world could not cultivate immortals, he had no choice but to adapt to this world.
then…
“Green caterpillar, evolved over a million years!”
“Come out! The empty seat…oh no, sky dragon
Loved it lol. Wish it was 50-100 chapters more since I would have liked to see more of both worlds from reylins perspective. Story did feel just a bit too fast for me but still great time all in all