I was only able to read the first chapter, but the base for the story is promising. The banter between the friends is relatable, and their dialogue flows well, which, to me; is a good sign for future chapters. The bus Scene is ?(I won’t say more because then it’ll be a spoiler?).There were a few present and past tense inconsistencies, but no grammatical errors or such that I found. All in all: both the work and author show high potential. Keep it going Author!❤️
it was good at first but when he picked that class warrior i stopped reading.
Kudos to the author , from the start this book captured my fancy and I can say for a fact that this is a book everyone should attempt to read . The grammar is on point , the style of writing is intriguing and just can't wait for more?
Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.
AS LONG AS IT HAS ROMANCE, I AM IN! I LOVE THE SUMMARY THOUGH I WISHED IT COULD BE A LITTLE MORE DETAILED, BUT IF YOU THINK IT'S ALREADY DETAILED IT'S FINE BECAUSE A NOVEL LIES IN THE PROGRESSION OF THE STORY
Hello, this is author.Actually, this is not my first story on this web. I failed some and trying to get this story done. But I need your help to support this story from now, so I can get real to finish this one. Even a little support like liking the tag is quite much to help me get enthusiastic to continue the story.
The synopsis has the hook that I'm looking for, and for the love of god, my head ached when I read about genetic engineering. Although I hesitated to read it as I'm not interested on any science-y novels, the way the author wrote this story flat out slapped me with the reality. I shouldn't judge without reading the contents lol and that's how good this is. I'm actually waiting for the next chapters, so I expect a chapter soon! THIS IS A MUST READ!
Haven’t read it yet, but since it’s the same author as The Law God: Arctic then it’s bound to be interesting. Just hope this time MC isn’t too OP.
Okay, so this book isn't for everyone. It's not a conventional level up type of book. The mc is summoned to another world with 49 other otakus that read light novels.He's offered a chance to become the protagonist, get op stats and a charm stat to start a harem from an evil god, but turns it down. As a result, he's left with no stats and has to survive the others that are treating the new world like a videogame/cultivator novel.Unlike most protagonists, he doesn't receive anything that helps him survive. So he's seriously defenseless.Luckily, he's a true brilliant mc and builds up a bodyguard troop of women and uses survival strategies to overpower everyone. I've read all of the chapters so far and it's absolutely brutal how ruthless he can be.I wouldn't recommend this book for someone that is looking for immediate action. However, if you're looking for a comedy or a book with smart mcs, this is your book.
Webnovel ought to start doing quality checks on translated novels, especially when they are charging people to read them. The fact that poorly translated content like this is allowed to remain on the site, behind a paywall at that, speaks volumes about their credibility and recent money grabbing rhetoric.
Sounds really good. Can we get the released out already please!!!! Faster release!!!!Faster release!!!!Faster release!!!!Faster release!!!Faster release!!!!Faster release!!!!!Faster release!!!!Faster release!!!!
spelling atrocious author too lazy to attempt fixing dropping it till it's fixed if ever