it's quit a good book and all but a lot of side characters chapter and released rate is low come on man at least 7 a weak
Fun and worth reading. .
Interesting. There are a lot of characters and some chapters are very long if reading on smartphone but it is fun to read. I feel close to Alexis and love to read her POV.
A popular premise, but well-executed. There’s a few flaws I wanted to point out, in the hope to help you progress.Your grammar is passable, although I would personally refrain from using the passive voice as much as you do. It makes sentences clunky, vague and awkward. So if you can change the subject of the sentence in order to rewrite it in active voice without this changing your meaning, I advise you to do so.There is an absence of rhythm in your writing. I’m aware it isn’t easy to write with rhythm, and personally, I struggle with it as well, but try to bring some more rhythm to your paragraphs.The dialogue is clear, but sometimes it comes across a a bit forced. Overall, I believe your work holds a lot of potential. I wish you luck!
Writing Quality ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️As far as I can tell(i don’t have the best memory) there are practically no erros in this book.Updating Stability ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️The Author updates at least once a day and two times most days so great job on that.Story Development ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️I love the story and the author has done and awesome job with the story and hasn’t left any plot holes or anything.Character Design ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️The character designs are amazing and all the important characters has extensive backround with no holes in them(unless there is something our author doesn’t want us to know yet)World Backround ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️The author has done a great job with the world backround and seems to have worked really hard on all the different characters and organizations in the world and the different events.Overall ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Overall this is an extremely well written books with little to no mistakes or plot holes. I definitely recommended if you want a book with a op mc and a VRMMORPG. There are also a lot of reincarnated as a slime references in the book. My only qualms about the book is there are some cliche romance scenes that I were disappointed about, and it does seem to be heading in the direction of harem(multiple girls are in love with mc).
amazing work keep up the good work (here an idea try adding creating table/workbench so when he upgrades it he can blue futuristic high walls)
"She's always so Indifferent to me... Despite being married for three days, we have not once held hands? I don't even know if she's my bride or my ANCESTOR!"
the first few chapter is beautifully done. i got stuck just after reading the first 10chapters,
After reading 60Chapter, it contain many aspect to view it as harem but still, the female lead is against the MC flirting with another women.
How do I stop this crap from showing on my screen every single fckin time?????????? Please just remove this nonsense. Djdiekdkdoodkdjdjdjdjdj
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Fuck everything sucks ,
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The usual VRMMO novel, Only differences being how an AI takes over the game just to make sure people can’t exchange Real world currency into gold coins, It has done nothing else as of yet. Second The Gaming world is kind of a Chinese cultivation world and not the western fantasy kind. Author loves to exaggerate a lot, And a ton of mistakes with numbers. Reincarnated MC, Who is hell bent on revenge, And is extremely OP from the start. Its goon enough read because of The MC main focus of revenge and he doesn’t back down. Personally the down point for me is the lack of MC’s guildmates and the over exaggerating of everything. There are too many holes. Still a fun read. Great cover bdw.
There is so much going on but it seem more like the author is trying to keep up with all the events than actually setting them up.