Author your ideas and conyepts are really good and unique in this novel but maybe its because of grammar or those weird mix words that disrupts the pace and likeness of this novel.
Seriously amazing, just the synopsis got me hooked. The well-written chapters of a magical world within the earth. Though chapters are few, it is making me hooked as I read further.
fun oblivious mc who finds the exceptiknal and marvelous in the ordinary! who needs a sword when you have a kitchen knife! who needs pills when you have soup!
Good Really like the MC Du Chan
Thanks for the novel
Is this dropped if not please let me know so I can come back to it although rough its a great novel.
not full rating star yet since it just 20 chapter
Awesome story;...........................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,..................................................................
Having spent hundreds upon hundreds of dollars on spirt stones on this site to read books I can honestly say that this book ranks in the top 5 I have ever read here.
The MC is ridiculously OP but yet not in a overbearing uninteresting way like other stories. There is humor, face slapping, a huge mystery, even some sadness. The pacing and development of both the characters are world is godly. Highly recommend this story, and prepare yourself for a rollarcoster of emotions when reading.
Well,
First few chapters are somewhat confusing but as you start to read it, All of your confusion will go down the drain.
Mystery starts from the very first chapter of this book. So, you guys will not get bored while reading this book.
Well I've only read 17 chapters till now but I think it's interesting enough if you liked reading ROTAG.
LATER GUYS.
An original cover page> Great synopsis tells the readers about the content of the story but still makes them curious about it.
The plot is interesting, your characters are expressive.
You're doing well!
The story is interesting and has good potential at the beginning.
The idea of bringing the farm into another world system is really good.
But I'm already coming to a major problem, it's unreadable (there's a wall of text in the chapters, no capitalization for the beginning of some sentences, punctuation is sometimes non-existent, chapter names sometimes mean nothing).
Now concerning the story itself it started slowly and only became really interesting after about 20 chapters, which is regrettable, but it is better to build a story with a good basis.
Some things about the story are not bad, but what bothers me is the Mc who is quite stupid, clear and simple, he has so many resources but doesn't even use a fraction of them and is too lazy to train even when he can make his shadows train for him, he still doesn't take it seriously and gets beaten by beginners who are even later, he decimates more than 60 dead eaters and kills them all and that's before he gets a good training and now in the 2nd world, he chose the twilight and honestly; it's probably the worst decision the author could have made, he's flinching at all the vampire eyes, which is a serious problem for a world that's not one of the most gory and terrifying.
Overall, an average novel that needs a publisher quickly, but I think it has good potential, the author is also very active with more than 60 chapters in 4 days.
Ps: I read the synopsis well so I know the author is a beginner and this novel is a bit of a draft but to improve it, you have to give constructive criticism.