I have read this book. This starts off as unique and good but it falls into the same Trope of Racism. This author was one of my Favourite ones so I am actually shocked to see such vitriol spewed in this book. If anyone wants to know what I am talking about, read ch 110.
This is by far the best novel of this trial period. Honestly, that doesn't make it a great novel though... The novels in this trial are just all kinda garbage.
What I like about :
Starting was pretty good.
1 : I also like how he used zerg tech to merge time alien and many thing he achieved using tech from different world.
2 : Mixing of different worlds tech , techniques , magic to achieve new.
What I don't like about :
1 : mc is a idiot. He acts like he is smart (sometime he actually come up with good things )but some time acts dumb waste his skills don't use them at all when result can be near cheat like things(he has a skill which allow him to absorb skill of others and he visits different worlds like marvel , fate , Godzilla, mass effect etc and do not use it , he also has ability to re write whole fucking DNA of any species he wants at his disposal )
2 : pedophile and lolicon , borderline rapist.
3 : There is no goal.
4 : He is to casual about thing like introducing tech and magic into different world and acts like he want to collect girls as trofie from different world and bitches about when he gets a title: god of magical girl.
5 : He kills all people in America when he marvel in the name of justice wile saying that since people pays taxes and vote for government which causes injustice they should all die. In mecha world he just saves Chinese people because the are good people let all people die because they are bad.
Well you can enjoy this about 1000 chapters because i don't think there is too much racisms in starting and in starting when mc was not powerfully it could be considered good and skills he got from world had very epic potential (which he wasted ).
In latter chapters racisms is full blown like killing westerns , Indian etc and pedophile , too op mc
Similar to "This Curse is Awesome"
Hopefully it's good.
Waiting for the trial read.
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It is quite interesting, anyone can pleasee give me the raws? It is quite interesting, anyone can pleasee give me the raws? It is quite interesting, anyone can pleasee give me the raws? It is quite interesting, anyone can pleasee give me the raws? It is quite interesting, anyone can pleasee give me the raws? It is quite interesting, anyone can pleasee give me the raws? Raws pleaseeee?
Writing Quality: The writing quality is phenomenal. The punctuation, spelling, grammar, all are really good and well designed. Next to no errors on the pacing, tone, and adjectives are well written and spread throughout the novel to give a nice variety without scaring the reader off nor boring enough to cause you to lose interest.
Updating Stability: Posts daily and each chapter is a nice read that draws you in and leaves you wanting more.
Story Development: The background of our MC is ambiguous and mysterious. How he was transported to this world, why he was sent there, and how come he has the system are all a mystery at this time.
The plot progresses fast enough that it the story isn’t stagnant but not too fast to the point where you are lost with what is going on.
Character Design: You have a wide range of supporting cast to choose from and each are unique and they are believable. The characters seem real and you most certainly will find at least one relatable character which is an amazing feat.
The MC is not overpowered to the point where he is invincible, but can be kinda dense at times and this makes him feel relatable.
World Design: The world is still very much a mystery but it’s absolutely expansive and the author has an excellent skill with exposition that just draws you in and brings you into the story.
Absolutely excellent novel and it well crafted and willing to bet with time it will become one of the best novels on the platform. Don’t sleep on this novel, add it to your library and you will not be disappointed!
can't say much with 2 chapters so I'm just gonna 5 star everything...........................................................................
Author please make mc normal again as being blind is not comfortable and make mc powerful, cold and ruthless too that should be cool!!!! !!!!!!!!!!
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