This book is definitely top notch, just a few chapters in and am already hooked. Keep up the good work author.
This novel has good grammar and an interesting plot that is developing nicely. So far, it is a pleasant read and it's quite easy to understand. Well done!
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Love your work just bought all 890
chapters keep up the good
Liked the characters of the previous realm. Hope they meet the sect master soon...................................................................
I like the story that’s all I have to say but since it has to be 140 charters long I’ll say the part I liked the most was the comedy I am easy to humor though and this is my first review I think.
Hi Author why have you stopped updating the novel?
I'll start with this: it is bad. I think I'm being pretty generous with my 3-star rating and mostly because it was not bad enough that I had to stop reading. It was good enough to kill time for someone who has read and watched so much media that it is difficult to find something that piques my interest.
No element of the plot is original and nothing ever goes wrong for the main character. The protagonist of the novel he transmigrates to is short-sighted so he does most of the work for the main character, who is supposedly the villain of the story. I've read half of the novel already and the teased "shop" of the system is still locked meaning there is little point to the system he gets aside from the starter boons he gets.
This novel could've been more interesting if the villain started without a system and had to work just a tiny bit harder to get what he wanted.
The first novel I ever read, very slow paced and the romance isn't anything heart-wrenching. However, the story level is the best I have ever seen with an intricate plot, great use of literary technique and life philosophy that I continue to apply to this day. If you like just reading mindlessly with strong characters, face slapping, megalomania and stomping on geniuses and getting girls then this isnt for you. This is for men of culture.
An excellent book with very few gramatical and spelling mistakes. Rarely can an author tie together such a chaotic stream of events in a way that feels just as rushed for the characters as it does for the readers without losing the sense of meaning and the stability of the world. The only fault in the this novel (series?) is that there isn’t more available to read! Not sure why there were only 2 chapters of a volume 2 released with no further updates or info but I would love to see the next chapters in our titular characters’ lives.
Third book in the series, despite it’s brevity I liked it quite a bit.
Jake is the “edgiest” of the three heroes but somehow as the edgiest he’s better at friends then Leon and Ryan. I thought that was amusing.
I’m sad it’s over already but I’m hoping we get to see a book 4 sometime.
As a note for the author, working on reducing some your crutch phrases like “in the end” might be a good idea.
Also a one chapter epilogue is kind of a bummer.
I like this story so far, I hope you create a wonderful world.
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