The story is very impressive MC is not only have stable mind about the world and it's power system he also is not some stupid mc who get overconfident with their new power and future potential. MC also has use his past novel knowledge to gain understanding of his situation and make decision based o it. Author pace of developing the story and world background is very nice and enjoyment for readers it's easy to understand the story. MC development whether it's strength or mindset is very clearly shown in the story step by step without any unnaturalness and author clearly mention or depicted it in the story so readers could understand it. I wish author will not drop this novel and I'm supporting u wholeheartedly.
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Hi everyone, I'm the author of True Essence.
I'll use this review to specify what my goals are with this novel.
First of all, this is my first novel, so bear with me a little bit :)
Let's follow the review grading.
Writing Quality 3/5 : It's the best I can do right now but I'm trying to improve myself day by day. I'm open to criticism, if you think it sucks, please tell me why, so I can try to fix it.
Stability of Updates 5/5 : Well, till now I never failed to post at least one charpter a day :) , I plan to post more as I get more used to it.
Story Development 3/5 : There's almost nothing right now, but I have some ideas in store. I hope you like it.
Character Design 5/5 : I like the main characters vey much, there's so many new ones to appear to, sigh, I really need to up my writing so they can enter the story.
World Background 3/5 : well, for now there's only a desert, but I plan to build a big world. If everything goes right the desert will be nothing more than a very little part of it.
Kinda weird to rate myself.
Now a little about why I'm writing this novel.
I love reading and the feeling it gives me when I immerse myself into a world. There's many stories that I love, but without a doubt my biggest inspiration is One Piece. I've been watching it since I was little and without a doubt I would not be the person I am today had I not watched it.
I just hope this story can bring someone the same feelings I have when I'm reading One Piece.
I really hope you'll give it a chance.
Thank you for reading :)
A nice story. I have read up to chapter 4, and I like it. Writing is good, not complicated words, simple, and the general plot looks good. Please continue updating the chapter.
The story so far is having a stable and very cool development, I recommend it.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
What's the difference between Parazyte and OP parazyte???
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Its alright till chapter 1000 but after that almost all the chapters are about china this, china that & "china Numbawan".. I tried to read after chapter 1100 something, even picked a few chapter after that at random to read but all were about how great china's culture is and how MC is going to introduce it to hollywood..
Shameless review by the author. Please forgive me T_T.
The story is at its beginning but feel free to feedback and help me improve the story along the way.
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