Compelling mysterious plot that piques my interest. I would have loved to know more about it but I guess I expected more chapters. Hopefully you'll update soon author. I would like to vote but I ran out of power stones. I'll get back to you once you update. Cheers to this!
Truthfully told!!! the story is amazing. I have seen so many movies like this genre but this one piques my interest. I am thinking why in every group there are two elites from like the ultimate and only one is normal. As if the game maker is trying to find out who is more capable. The elites? Or the normal ones! Keep it up, please! Cause I need more chapters!!!
So our mc transmigrate to another world where there are martial spirits, they thought he was really talented until they discovered he has no martial spirit. Well of course just like any other novel out there, our mc 'suddenly' have found a cheat where he can devour martial spirits. So it is kinda cliche but If you are into stories like this, you could give it a try.
Who knew I was going to find my new love here; this book is the best; a dream come true in the world of isekai[img=recommend][img=recommend]; I hope this book won't get dropped
Chapter 4 currently:The concept behind this story is good but the execution is subpar at best. The main flaw that the author has is that they rush through things too quickly. Now let’s get to the main points:Writing Quality: Barely readable. As stated earlier, the author rush through things and doesn’t give characters any type of emotions behind their actions. This make it difficult to understand characters and the action they take.Story Development: There’s barely anything i can say here since it’s just the start.Character Design: This is a bad one. Currently, characters have no personality whatsoever. Actions done by them make no sense. Take the “neglected treatment” for example, I doubt that the main cast would allow things to get that far, especially naruto who has been a victim of such thing. World Background: Literally everything revolves around “Root bad, Danzo bad, Mc and his family are treated badly, woe be me” and it’s annoying. Not to mention how flawed the backstory of the ocs are, Root agents are literally brainwashed till they’re blank state. Danzo is not a character that can trust anyone with that type of information or power. And even if somehow the ocs backstory are somehow true, Danzo literally have failsafes on his root soldiers. I doubt he’ll let the father live since he knows so much.
review is heavily bias because i have read others and this cant stand up to those in comparison even though i would rate them 3/4 stars.this genre is starting to be overdone
it's basically I can create perfect accidents but more descriptive on the gore but I must admit I like both stories so that's nice although it's very similar to the point that it's very ridiculous to
I’ll be honest! I don’t know if is a original work or a translation but the story is good if you leave behind all the mistakes in the translation or writing??I have been reading a lot of MTL stories so I don’t Have problems reading stories like this one!Give it a try ???
There are so many plot holes in the story, the story development is good but I think 2 stars is enough.########## ############____________ _____________....... ....... ....... ............... ....... ....... ............. ..... ..... .......... ... .... .......... ..... ...... ........................ .................. ....... | | ....... ####### _______________ ---------
Bruh I swear to god if this doesn't get picked then I'll lose all hope in trial reads. Decent concept, and the system does not make the MC too OP. There are some translation mistakes, but they are very rare even in the first 20 chaps...
Awesome!!!!! knowing the fact that you are OP and actually using it well enough that's what i like, not like all those other ones where you start doing something unnecessary like using extreme speed to safe a loved one and still end up being a split second late causing little harm and making you go super saiyan mode on someone, in times where you could have just stopped time, teleport, erased him from existence and everything is fine ryt?
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