a blatant homosexual novel.. but honestly it is a great read highly recommend. the main focus of the story is chens one sided love of grandmaster zhu his dream is to constantly be within 5 steps of the grandmaster, such actions constantly bring the man pleasure, but his lol level talent makes him unable to close the distance between himself and the grandmaster.
first of all, the writing quality is not bad but also not perfect either.second, character design not bad usually the mc is a pet shop owner at almost every novel that i read.third, for updating stability idk because i read it when the novel is a new as "trial read novel" and world background is standart, i say because it only begining of the novel story.Last of it, the story development is something that i don't like it, to fast pace development for a vet pet monster and to chaotic that i think slow and steady normal development and suddenly mc have to many pet monsters before 50 chapters this is a vet mc not a pet shop mc or an adventur/tamer mc this is just ridiculous for mc got 3 pet monster from the museum to fish gambling to pet monster mall one after another also to many detail that make the development make sense for example you need 2 or 5 status shard to make a complete status as system say but in some chapter the requirment had change and for grading pet monster power and rarity is to jumble no consistent because of this development, that i think this novel will stop at chapter 40 and never will continue
Good start, the update pace is good. The system seems to be a little arrogant, MC seems to be a over achieving Joe undeserving of the system like the otaku MC's.
I've really enjoyed reading this story so far and will continue to do so with any updatesI really hope this doesn't get dropped like so many stories on this site
this novel seems like a copy cat of the first order (manhua) I'm not sure if this is the novel of that manhua but if not then it's an absolute ripoff. aside from the power being different, the entire beggining is the same.
Hi if anyone knows the raw name for this novel and the website its on could someone please tell me i would really appreciate it i looked everywhere the shapeshift part keeps translating to deform or transform.
Garbage... You can tell that the Author didn’t want to put any real effort into making this novel.I gave up after 12 chapters.Personally, i could rant all day on this novel and still need another week before I reach a point of having nothing left to complain about.Waste of my time.Don’t waste yours.P.S. - You’ll probably find some of my paragraph notes if you decide to read, even after my warning.
Hi guys, I’m writing between 1 and 2 chapters a day, I’m a student at university and I have a part time job on the side so I can’t do anymore. Anyway if you could drop by and leave me a review, good or bad as long as it’s constructive I’ll take it and try to become better using your advices. You can also comment on the chapters I do my best to answer every one of them.
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Very much similar to that one reborn thief novel. I had good hopes at beginning but it just seems like your average vrmorpg nothing to special. Maybe it will get better but most likely not. Good luck to those who stick with it let me know at a later time if it’s worth a read
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