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"You..."
He squeaked in terror before dunking into a bowl of cold soup.
I've been enjoying this story so far, but the chapter Dorm Life was annoying to read. Even though they ganged up on him, they could have fought back. Sure, they still would have been beaten, but they could have at least done some damage to the bullies. Also, Kiro is a grown adult in mind and soul, yet he's still acting petty and immature.
Don’t abandon this one it’s coming along way smoother than most stories could.
It's from my little Akk, So of course I'm ganna give it 5 starshelp me he has me at gun point.
It's clear the author puts a lot of hard work into their story. The story updates often, and not a chapter goes by that some kind of new information is introduced that makes the plot more interesting. Keep up the good work, author.
just here to review for a fastpass eventl
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I like how kickass Mavy is! Aside from her kickass, abilities she's also a regular teenager with raging hormones but is also sweet to her friends. The setting is also clearly describe, I was literally transported to the future. It was written like it's really already been happening...it's uniquely written too. I like it so much!!
The Story is good, but the strength development isn't natural, like someone gained strenght faster than mc or the goddess comes in the early of the story and mc make war declaration against the goddess is simply make mc like those chinese story man
Author took down most of the story to sell on amazon. Not high enough quality for that...................................................................
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