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Written on ch33 it’s a good wn but be really warned it’s depressing as f**k but omg is good but man ordinary human is a depressing story writer tho he is fun and addicting writer please do give it a try and read thro. Maybe you will regret it…
choose to read this book because of the reviews but somehow i felt disappointed ?i dont know its just me or anyone else felt the same as me. the storyline for first 10 chap are slow. its hard for me to understand it quickly. the words, the line are translate well and straightforward, but i still think its lacking something.because i feel sleepy when i read it. the story also confused me sometimes. however its not cause me headaches thankfully. (bookworms knows what i mean)i meant to not criticize but this is my honest review bout this book. however its a book with good story dev. its not an ordinary trasmigrate story with faceslapping scene. you can find alice in the wonderland scene in this book! more to fantasy adventure i assume huhu.thank you for read this humble review.im off first. gonna read other books! see u when i see u?
It's a wonderful read. The first two chapters threw me off making me think here we go again a harem, but I was pleasantly surprised. There is a bit of everything and the premise is refreshing. Hello ancestor. ?
A pretty good start for the new novel looking promising.expecting new release......................................................................................................................................
Honestly never knew that I could be so invested in a book before. It is so amazingly structured and I love the way that the author writes! Highly recommended.
Not that a synopsis can be trusted, but I do see some potential at least to the start. It is enough to get me to look into this. As long as this doesn't fizzle out after the first 60 to 80 chapters...
The name of the novel + the Harem Tag is the reason of 1 star...Tidy5iutslys96iysl5l86s86sld0c8eo85w4o7ww5x9797q459w7iq7x494xw4q6q4xi6974xwi64xqh
Writing Quality - 5 stars | Very good writing quality considering the fact that the author isn't even a native English speaker. To be honest, most of the time the only errors are when he uses words that aren't as impactful as others with the same meaning.Stability of Updates - 5 stars | Would give an even higher if allowed. That's all I have to say about it because there is a minimum of 2 chapters a day (of good quality) and up to 7-8.Story Development - 4 stars | I would have given a 5 star for this section if the MC wasn't such a dumb*ss sometimes. He acts very stupid and is always headstrong in what he wants to do.Character Design - 4 stars | Well designed characters, regardless if they are side characters or just onlookers. The author accurately portrays the actual human behavior unlike most cultivation novels.World Background - 3 stars | Cultivation is everything in this novel but the rankings aren't defined in terms of strength. Most of the time it is just like 'Ohh I got more Qi!' or something like that. It doesn't even define the proper amount.Overall: What can I say? It's an amazing novel which I like to read. I love novels that have any type of cultivation in them however a lot of them just screw up the systems by adding 20 different levels every time the MC breaks through. I'm just pointing out what needs to be improved on and the strong points of this novel; no bashing here.
nice read. ???hope this one get picked.????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
like the cat says mooooooooooooooooioore
I don't know who copied who or if it is the same author with a different pseudonym, but this novel is 95% similar to Animal assassin group. It doesn't even try to be anything worth while.Please webnovel, add quality control.