Keep up the work author ?I hope you don’t abandon your writing:)Good luck and have a nice day?
It’s an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.
Peak…………………………………………………………….... read it.
NTR STORY. ... MC GOT NTR'ed. ... DON'T READ
Great start so far. Really interesting and good future plot. Looking forward to more. The MC isnt an idiot. The Help is smart and doesnt seem to drag him down.
I have only read three chapters of this boook and I am already in love with Marcus and Juliana.
Hello everyone, I will leave this humble (cuf cuf) review here for those that want to ask something before starting to read my novel so you can save yourself some unpleasant surprises that you dont want to read, I will try to answer in the most brevity possible. Having said that, I will say that this novel won't have [NTR], [RP], [INC], or any other heavy topics of fetishes.
I didn't get much into the novel since it started with the typical protagonist who wants to live a quiet life and not attract attention, and I am completely tired of these protagonists, if you don't care then give it a chance.
Going to start with getting the bad out of the way: you will find errors and a lack of ponctuation at times, it's not very bad (there are worst in this app) but you need to be ready for it ( it probably wouldn't be a bad idea to get an editor but those thing cost money i guess) and also, this is more annoying then bad (alot of people do it in this ap), the writer, sometimes tries to "milk" it, he doesn't do it alot but it does appear from time to time.Now, with the bad out of the way, the story is very good, you can see he took some inspiration from Only I Level Up, if you like it you'll like this, the story progresses at an even pace, the main character is relatable, the world is very interesting and the side characters are solid, the writer is very good with updating the story ( that might change with time because of life but so far so good) and you can see the writer as plan for his story that, this is me guessing, will take sometime to complete so the story will be around for a while. I recommend this story for everyone.
The Monster pounched me, kick me, over and over.
"Soon you will know by yourself."
"Ifritz, I already told you desu, you called my name in a wrong spell, the right is Kaenjieeeeee! Desu".