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Major plot holes in the prologues which is already a red flag. Many more plot holes are in the story and even though the MC wrote the story and characters, he blames them for being rude. Some small grammar problems. It just gets rather boring trying to ignore all the plot holes. And how hypocritical the MC is.
Is good.
The Development Of The Story Is Good I Can't Say I'm A Big Fan Of The Story But The Style Of Writing Is One Of The Best I've Read, While There Might Be Some Inspiration For The Book I Can Just Overlook It Due To How The I've Read Only The First Three Chapter's But I Do Love The Story And I Hope It would Gain The Recognition It Has, While I Hope The Author Continue To Finish This Novel.
Very interesting book! I love the flow. Looking forward to read more. I learned new things. And the more I read the more I get curious about what will happen next. Job well done. Keep it up
Just great.. besides some troubles with the grammar and the inevitable slow-release, considering the quality, it's perfect.. It's worth the title, the MC is really badass.. the situations are created in a way that a lot of novels lack to supply the MC.. I expect some plot twists though, as if keeps steady at this pace, it might be a little saturated.. but all in all, it's great, and it only has 30 something chapters rn.. keep the great work..
A typical world with potals and invading creatures. That's not really interesting. Nor is the system the MC has. The plot itself is reasonably interesting though. Grammar is DOGSHIT. Not really smooth to read. Got some mixed feelings about this one. There are certainly better novels of this setting and genre like "World's Best Martial Artist"